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Tomorrows Dust
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
Oh my god, my heart ached with this fic. Just unbelievable. It's amazing. Beyond amazing actually, it's quite possibly the best story I've ever read. It made my heart clench and it was just so beautiful, you've really outdone yourself with this one. It's a masterpiece, thank you for putting it up ^^

Huggels, Tomorrows Dust
Swasti
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
I love this verse so much. Beautiful!
Kaewi
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
I continue to love this 'verse! I love that you keep adding more to it. It always breaks my heart a little, and yet it's extremely uplifting as well. I hope you don't stop anytime soon :)
anon
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
You know I find so interesting the counterpoints between this and the Still Life verse (which is granted my total and complete favorite thing ever). This one seems to fit them so much easier, with honestly the biggest danger of Dean losing himself and inadvertently his own health in his desire to constantly care for Sam and make him happy. (And I would be up for seeing one where he continues to lose weight and all the stress does endanger his health until he learns some balance.) But in Still Life, it is so much harder for Sam to take on a role he's never had. And while the love is just as deep, the pain is far deeper, and Sam's struggle is to keep his sanity and do his fumbling, stuttering, not-a-first-born-nurturer best to make Dean's life the best it can be now. But, oddly, again in the reverse, I think it's making Sam stronger, and it's darker and Dean's so fucking adorable vulnerable and I love it. Both same situation, just reversed, and what a difference it makes!
ThE NiGht's DaRk StaR
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful,just like always :)
Thru Terry's Eyes
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Wonderful as always.
Meggin Lane
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
you did such a good job with how Dean reigns himself in all the time when ever there is a stong emotion to be faced. I found myself screaming at the computer screen, "Come on..hold Sam, take him up in your arms and just let him know how much you mean to eachother!"

So by your skill the story kept me in angnst through out.

Way to place the reader in Dean's POV
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