that ending was unexpected but ausome

... That... Was The Most F'ED UP ENDING EVER! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! Wo! hahahahaha 5 F'ing Stars All the way!

NANI! NO DON'T END IT NO!

...wtf?
i have no idea what to say about this chapter.

... Nice ending XD

-laughs insanely- wow...Didn't expect that...^^ Awesome chapter, liked the ending!

wow, that's sad.. Poor Atlas

OMG NOZ! THE MOLESTER (orochimaru) GOT AWAY! good chap.!

Wow the chapter was amazing cant wait for the next chapter.

Yippee! Lucky me! -sarcasm- Great...
Awsome chapter though, very suspensful

AH! SOMEONE HELP NIKKI! Poor Eclair, Naruto, and dare I say it? Sasuke..

good chapter!
Orochimaru seemed a little more creepy and scary doesn't he?

I LOVED THE CHAP! PLEASE MAKE MORE! NO ECLAIR IS GONNA GET RAPED BY MICKLE JAKSON!XD LOL

update son

Wot!! Sounds like fun!! ILUVYOUARETHEBESTPERSONEVA!!