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Red Rider
2008-09-02 . chapter 2
Man, this brightened up my day. I've been going through Miego withdrawal. I've pretty much recently been obsessed with Phoenix Wright ever since I actually got used to playing it. Miego is probably my favorite pairing right now, but sadly the fandom seems to be lacking much of it.
Smart Aleckette
2008-09-02 . chapter 2
I like it so far. I can imagine Diego Googling Mia's last name. XD

I'l keep an eye out for this for sure.
Smart Aleckette
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
Hmm. Interesting and well-written, with a few mistakes;

He waved towards one of the doors—the one with his name on a plaque—and as Mia breathed in to 

retort, she caught the scent coming from that office. It was the scent of coffee, so rich and aromatic it practically had color. She’d lied earlier. She did like a good cup of coffee… on occasion.]

Should all be on one line.

“Not if that lawyer means to make friends,” Mia shot back. Ugh, why had she let him drag her into here? He was just a prying flirt with apparently no respect for other people. She set the mug down 

on his desk, still half-full, and turned sharply to leave.]

Your paragraph got separated again. :(
Nyukisan10
2008-09-01 . chapter 2
Beautiful.
I like the plot line...
thanks 4 story!
Please update soon!!
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