I was cute, but you really ought to spell check and re-read before you post. This is littered with spelling and puncuation errors. Good luck on your sequel if you do one!

Lol that's great that you wrote about that part!

It's a very cute one-shot story but you have a few spelling errors. Just thought I'd point that out.

Two words for you SPELLING ERRORS but besides that it was good.

Do a sequel!

Well...that was short. And some of the words ran together and looked like a load of garlic what I couldn't make out...but it was good. I like Percy fics, s'long as they aren't slash.

This

was

interesting

in

a

good

way.

Very

creative

of

you

to

write

a

fic

using

Percy

Weasley.

Hey!

Where

did

the

spacebar

go!

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Awwww, that is so cute! I always tought from the start when Ginny found out that Percy and Penelopie were together that they were cute! Write more stuff like that.

It was very cute and I love Percy/Penny pairings, however, this story would go from "good" to "great" if it had been Beta read. Other then the spelling errors, I liked it a lot.

okay, this was pretty good. Make a Colin Creevy/Hermione one!

Is your keyboard sticking? Very good!

Awww! Cute story, I absolutely love Percy fics-especially percy and penelope fics. Umm, it was a little grammatically confusing, but once ya got past that, it was a really sweet story. :)

That's it? Well any way, I noticed some of your words were strung together and I figured you just need to press [insert] and you should have the problem of not being able to insert letters and words when you see you've made a typing error.

Cute! Cutecutecutecutecute! More please!

I would like if you keep the story!

Ilove this couple.