aaaw such a sad and yet lovely one-shot.

Very nicely written.

THis is relation dose Charliie and Hermione have.:D

Aww...Poor Grangers...

Still, amazing story as always!

*crying slightly* god,that's horrible,I keep thinking about dad when I read this. Thankfully he's alive and that I have with me..for now. I'm glad your showing more of this side of Charlie and the action is bloody awesome.*Smiles*

oh so ssad

Oh! Poor Hermoine.

Great work

i liked the darker chap added some variation into the story.

Keep up the good work. :D

aw poor hermione! at least she has someone like Charlie to help her out in her time of need...and i would have to agree with you on the fact that men to tend to get very mad when women in their life are hurt. Great job!

pinkie

WAH! NOT THE DENTISTS! NO WAY! POOR HERMIONE! that dude is gonna b soo dead when charlie gets a hold of him...mwahahahaha!

I really love this series you have going on. Charlie/Hermione has become one of my new favorite pairings, and you portray them both very well. This installment was definitely a lot darker then the others, but I think it added a nice touch. No one goes through the perfect relationship or life in reality, and I think that's exactly what you've got going here, a good attachment to reality. Can't wait to read more in this!

Awh, poor Hermione!

Please post the next part as soon as you can!

I always love reading your work. All your stories are written so well. This is the best one shot series I have ever read. I can't wait to see the next part. So please post it as quickly as possible. I also like how senstive you made !

WOW

you took really long writing this chap up.

but nways this was good and sad at the same time

oh poor Hermione, this is a great series though, its really well written, another soon please!

this chapter was wonderfully writen :]