AWESOME! love this. and sui :D

i'm not good at reviews. haha

This is the first story I've found that does not use Suigetsu as a convenient romance pairing. And it's GOOD! Thank you very much!

It's been half a billion years since I saw Naruto, and I have no idea who Suigetsu is, but you've made me think maybe there might be something going on there that would make it worth picking up again. Maybe...I was sure burnt out on it though...

This is a really good portrayal of Suigetsu.

Poor sui-kun. Thanks for writing this. If you can please write more about him. I'm trying to make a c2 of kisame and suigetsu fics but their aren't many out there.

Interesting... A nuanced look at the formative experiences that underlay what are now Team Hawk. Seeing their first impressions of each other is definitely an interesting perspective on where they are now.

Thanks for sharing this!

This was a great characterization of team taka. It was very believable, I especially like how you captured Suigetsu's personality.