Funny, vey funny. Great story.

the word 'hillarious' doesn't even start to describe it! I was crying of laughter! it's great! right more! ;)

Oh wow! This just made me laugh and was the brightest part of my day thus far! (And it's 11:40 pm...so good job!) You have a real gift of humor. Please write more MFL. I'd love to keep adding it to the forum!


Hey and I like reviews too. *cough Cough*

Okay, you asked for reviews so here we go.

Firstly I would like to say how much your story made me laugh, I cannot deny that, 'cheaters anonymous' almost brought me to tears! You write wonderfully, and you capture the true essence of humour that many wouldn't asociate with My Fair Lady, but somehow you have a magic with words that made so much of this brilliant!
However, there are a few things I have picked up on the way that are slightly questionable; for example, it is unlikely that Higgins would spend so much time in bars becoming intoxicated, as this would not fit with his upper class status. Also, after said breakthrough (rain in spain), Eliza miraculously turned into a lady, and no trace of her previous Lisson Grove dialect could be found. I also doubt there would be any rush hour traffic in London 1912; cars were still a minority I believe. There were also a few things that were unlikely to have happened at the time, and I thought there were a few innapropriate phrases for it, however that did not tarnish my videw on this as a whole.

Please don't be alarmed by the length of my review or take my criticisms harshly, I just feel that this is such a wonderful piece of writing, and you are such a creative author that you deserve as much constructive criticism as possible.

I adored reading it, pleae keep up the fantastic work. X

:laughing hard: FINALLY! thanks for finishing it!

Brilliant! Just brilliant!

i would have LOVED to have seen what higgins WOULD have looked like after she had gotten through with him if she HAD heard him... lol probably LIKE the "Blasted Cockney lobster in a tutu"

lol five spiders! three fly's! and a partridge in a pear tree!

I definitely didn't think that you would go so far as to kill off any of the characters, just wanted to let you know about the chloroform. Glad they didn't try to kill each other in this chapter though.

Good luck on the history test.

Still very funny although I'm not too sure about the chloroform idea. Yes, it knocks people out...but, with enough of it, it is used to kill people. Of course, I have no idea how much it takes to do so. Can't wait for more though.

i REALLY didn't think i would like this. but it's funny! i'm enjoying it. you should probably reread your chapters though and edit some of the small grammatical errors that are there

Another very good chapter. I would kind of like to see what the men at the bar think if Higgens mentions that he was run out of his house by a hormonal woman.

Haha, I'm so glad you decided to write more, it's very funny. It's almost as if they're BOTH pms-ing.

HA HA HA! Funny, funny, FUNNY! Absolutely hilarious, and, oh, so true!

Very amusing but I think you should write the whole week.