...O.O Oh! That was so unbelievably Hot! Nice chapter and I loved the ending I love Bella and Edward's Banter! One of my favorite stories!

She slept with him. Skank. Tanya too." -ROFL!

I loved the ending Perfect end to this chapter, I wonder how things will turn out for the kid! Edward's such a smug bastard I love him! LoL

"I was watching Ripple. His palms were bleeding from clenching them so tightly."

One of my favorite lines in this chapter!

It's sad that the CUllens are dead but at least we got Edward! I LOVE Ripple..ahem Edward.

I absolutely LOVE this PLOTLINE!

Hahahaha. I think it's hilarious that he had been planning to seduce her anyway.

Seriously, Bella. Make the connection. Though the story would almost be over too quickly if she did this early on, huh. Oh well, I still think it should be obvious. Maybe it's because we all already know that it's Edward.

Anyway, I really like this story, and I kinda wish you would update more often :P But as long as you're trying, it floats my boat.

Anna

Great chapter. Please update soon.

I thought there'd be more sexual tension before the lemon.. but it was a nice surprise.. I wonder if Bella will find out the truth about Edward on her own or will he tell her? and I really want to know waht he took from that room! update soon please! xD

yay! edward and bella got fu*cky! XD

so she hasn't put two and two together then? That is so freaken awsome, though from the sounds of it he gets alot of ass can't wait to read more!

Ripple...Edward... is the love of my life! lol... didn't expect the lemon so soon.. but loved it all the same ;) and wow.. he told her his name! is she gonna put two and two together?

this is so good!

i would of never thought this story was good, but it is.

can't wait 4 the next chapter

interesting, longer chapters please!

i love this story it is unlike anything i have read so far keep it up.

Can't wait for more. Enjoyed it.