This was very good.

I could almost "hear" Zuko and Toph talking as I read the dialogue, and I wish I had seen this scene really happening in the show.

Oh well, let's leave the Zuko/Toph sibling bonding thing in the "what-could-have-been-done-better-in-the-show" already long list.

No doubt, you did it better :)

And, I just love the last line XD ...so 'Toph' to think that way!
:>)

lol! Love it. I also thought that Toph and we the viewers got short-changed on their field trip in the series. Thanks for correcting that oversight! I would have loved to see what she did to Sokka to regain her edge though! Kudos to you.