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MISS'Hannah-MarieHale'BOOKWORM
2009-08-25 . chapter 4
update?
P-wease. *pouts*
great stuff
GadgetCid
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Oh, I really DO hope you update soon!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-06-14 . chapter 4
Wow!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-06-14 . chapter 3
Wow! I really like it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-06-14 . chapter 2
I like it!
Gandalf the Grey-Edelwiess
2009-06-14 . chapter 1
Wow.
Little Karma
2009-05-31 . chapter 4
great story i really love it, update soon please
hermiones heart and soul
2009-02-12 . chapter 4
I like this story, please continue
xXHannah LupinXx
2009-02-08 . chapter 4
This story is amazing! Can't wait for more!
Wicked Lovely 17
2009-01-28 . chapter 4
awesome please update soon.
Wicked Lovely 17
2009-01-28 . chapter 3
cool.
JaceDamian23
2009-01-25 . chapter 4
A slightly awkward silence fell over the Golden Trio, neither of the three knowing what to say. Finally, Harry spoke up.

“So, what have I missed since I’ve been out?” Hermione timidly asked, wanting to break the quiet around them.

um hun you should edit that or something because 'harry' did not speak up.


Aw poor Draco


great update hun. Loved it. keep up the good work
JaceDamian23
2009-01-25 . chapter 2
Now, he was here to help a new member of his kin adjust to their drastically changed life. However, unlike the other times, when he had never met the patient before, he knew the female in question. He taught her as girl, fought beside her when she was a teen, and came to think of her as a good friend after everything they had been through

um im so freaking confused lol...isn't Hermione a teen now? You are writing her like she is not a girl or a teen anymore lol...


“You’d like that wouldn’t you?! Send the little know-it-all Gryffindor mudblood out during the full moon at full strength to wreak havoc on innocent humans, thus insuring her being sent to Azkaban! And, if I don’t take the bloody potions, I will most likely become so weak it will be fatal! It’s a win-win situation for you Slytherins!” She spat out, her teeth bared in a vicious snarl, and they could hear her give off a small growl.

Utterly stunned, the two human wizards unconsciously took a step back.


haha good part


I also love how Remus and Mione have like a daughter/ father relationship. That is cute. Also like how Sirus is still alive...maybe he'll join them during the full moon once..that would be cute.
JaceDamian23
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
ha well I won't tell you what you just asked. I love Mione as a werewolf and love this pairing.

I like that Snape found her. good start
Reid N JJ forever
2008-12-30 . chapter 4
I S-I-M-P-L-Y L-O-V-E T-H-I-S S-T-O-R-Y!

I love how Remus and Hermione are more like father and daughter in this story - how their deep friendship is only strengthen trough this rough period for Hermione. I'm glad tha Hermione has Remus to lean on as a father figure during this very massive adjusment she is going through - becoming a werewolf.

Can't wait o see her first meeting with Harry and Ron.
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