 LaughableBlackStorm 2008-10-30 . chapter 1Only 1 review? My God.
This story was...breathtaking. I can't even describe it. You wrote Malfoy and Harry so perfectly - Malfoy's sarcasm and confused thoughts, and Harry's defiance. The choppier scenes were great for the atmosphere of the story, and added the right amount of angst. The last two lines of the story were also fantastic, and just a wonderful ending. You are truly a very talented author! Well done! |