aw plz continue this is good

This story is very interesting.. I have always wondered how the 2 got together because it never really said, and I can see my conservative, quiet Olivia acting like that

Steeleafan, I commend you for your very good effort's in writing this story. In my opinion you have captured the very young Olivia and John quiet well, I look forward to reading more of your story. Job well done. Kathy

The story has a mediocre flow to it. Also, in the television show, John calls Olivia 'Liv', but that really doesn't mess with the story in my mind.

I believe you have potential, and it's a very cute story.

Godiva ♥.

At the beginning of the first chapter John called her Liz. On the show he called her Liv, as in Olivia.

I can see John being a bit of a roughhouse with her and her being sort of pruddish.

This was cute. Continue on, please.

KeDe