That was SO SAD! D: D: D: D: D: D: D: They saved him nothing! Stupid Raph, I never liked him that much anyways...

Great story! If my tear duct would actually WORK (*is agro*) I would probably be drowning the city in my tears (*is sad*)

This seriously made me cry!! Very well written.

ok, so this it the third time I've read through this story and my verdict is still the same. This story sucks! Sucks in all the best ways! It's well written, and well put together, and quiet, somehow, just as it ought to be, and I hate reading it because it hurts so right! Stupid story...

you're amazing. :cries:

No! My Donny can't be that sad!! :(

This was so sad and somber! I didn't expect that, but I haven't seen too many episodes of TMNT so maybe the series was more serious than I remember.

Very realistic portrayal of grief and the different methods people deal with loss, by withdrawing emotionally, trying to lose themselves in work, or even self-denial.

Nicely written.

"They hadn’t saved him any dinner."

Oh, that made my heart hurt - it was so painfully juxtaposed with the other thoughts/paragraphs.
Very nicely written - the flow felt quite natural.

Hope to see more from you!

Oh, quite sad! But very very good. I'm not a fan of death fic, but I really liked the way you did Donny in this. The whole scenery of him working in his lab and how everyone's reacted to his death is ftw. Make more!

So sad, but very good

All I can say is: Well written. You did a great job of evoking emotions and handled it all well.

Hi, Zig-zag!

That was so sad! I didn't know that Michaelangelo died in the series. Or was that something you made up? Anyway, I liked the flow of the story, your imagery of the too-quiet lair. I particularly liked the last paragraph. It is very evocative of Donatello's grief. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

Terry

Pretty gut-wrenching stuff. Your writing structure is sound and the grammar, spelling, punctuation etc...is all excellent.

A good story with enough description to keep you reading but not so much that you stray from the story.

This was kind of sad, but good, and I liked it.

See, Donny, what can come with too much quiet? I think losing Mikey would be the hardest on all of them, because I mean... He's just so lovable. Raph and Leo have a love-hate relationship, and when you pair Don and Leo or Don and Raph up they're close, I suppose... But Mikey is the baby, you know?

Anyway, enough of me explaining things you already know. Good job, you were able to make me frown at my cheerios.

(Don't feel bad lol)