|Reviews for Never Lost|
| DeadFuzz 2/15/09 . chapter 5
This story just keeps getting better and better and your writing skills are absollutely flawless!
once again when i read the email that says you've updated your story- Im thrilled! and excited and in love!
I totally understand about your hectic schedule so all is forgive :D
oh and btw you are an excellent poem!
This story is beutifull!
| Bipolar Parrot 1/13/09 . chapter 4
This is brilliant, really and truly. It's absolutely heart wrenching and captivating. I'm afraid it has me a bit too worked up to give anymore of a review. I look forward to the next chapter.
| eliska 11/4/08 . chapter 4
Can I have the honor of lopping off Randy's head? Because I so, so very want to right now...
Once again, your brilliance is shown here quite clearly. It's disgusting how people could be so ignorant; I guess Einstein was right then, that human stupidity really is limitless. Blehh. But, as bad as it gets, there's always someone out there that has been through crap and is willing to help others... like Stan.
Sighh... I'm depressing myself with this review. 8D.
I hope to see more soon :)
(PS Stan and Kenny also make a great couple... xD.)
| DeadFuzz 10/31/08 . chapter 4
“We already knew he was a faggot, no need to publicise it….” i was gobsmacked and i feel like crying
its amazing that even after something so tragic happens people still cant open their minds or their eyes
“Every word, Mrs Marsh.” He grinned even wider. “I think Kyle approved, don’t you?”
i love kenny so much right now- he was there for kyle he was there for sharon and hes there for stan i just want to cuddle him
well thats quite all right u deserve every freaking review that u get (*but only the good ones) i love ur story
omg. .kenny (oo)
is it just me or does ur writing get more and more astounding everytime u update?
your writing continually gets better and better
| thequillofdestiny 10/31/08 . chapter 4
I love this story. I'm sad Kyle is dead, but your writing is so amazing, and I could definitely picture Kyle doing something like that in the bar. Keep up the story, because I totally want to keep reading. :D
| Caz Dowse 10/31/08 . chapter 4
Hey Gari, I have only one thing to say about that story - WOW. I actually cried when Stan saw Kyle in the morgue, and gave his eulogy.
I think it's great that you are raising an important issue like homophobia, because it's something that we all need to be aware of, and needs to be stopped.
Please post again soon!
| Shad'sGirl12 10/31/08 . chapter 4
Awesome story so far. Please update soon
| kaybeexx 10/30/08 . chapter 4
You are an incredible writer. There is simply no other way to put it. You're incredible.
This fic has brought on a range of different emotions. Anger and frustration seem to be the leading two. It's absolutely absurd and disgusting that this type of discrimination actually exists, but you've brought it into a different light. I don't even know how to put into words how this story is making me feel (as strange as that sounds) but the fact that it's making me feel is amazing all on its own.
You're amazing and you've got my respect. I can't wait for the next chapter
(I really like the quotations at the top, too.)
| An Ferbasach 9/21/08 . chapter 3
(This is Fushigi on her other account :P)
Sorry for the delay in reviewing, I had a copious amt. of hw to deal with... .
Anyways, gosh, that was another amazing chapter. I wanted to #*$$ Randy after seeing his response... who would've thought he was so unable to understand after previous suggestions of his possible homosexual tendencies in the show?
I also loved the Kenny part in the last section of this chapter. You made a very good point there, and I hope the rest of this fandom would come to read and appreciate this fic. For not only is this a statement against homophobia, it is also a statement against prejudice of any kind. Why would anyone want to hate others for what they are when the hated group cannot change? It's a stupid thing to do really...
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
(P.S. Did I mention how much I love cynical!Kenny? :3)
| nolyte 9/20/08 . chapter 3
This story is...amazing. I can't possibly tell you how much I respect you for putting this out. You're a skilled writer and you're making something really important here; a message that needs to be heard. Thank you for writing this and please continue.
| alan is stupid 9/18/08 . chapter 3
Yet agan, you've made me tear up. I don't know whether I want to strangle Sharon or give her a pat on the head for finally realising what she's done to her relationship with her only son. I definately want to strangle Randy, though. My jaw actually dropped in shock when he tried to stand up in protest at Kyle's funeral-seeing that Randy has shown a few gay tendencies in the past, you'd think he'd understand... I wonder what the rest of South Park thinks of Stan's confession.
Not only have you portrayed Stan's inconsolable greif perfectly, but you've also done a great job of showing Kenny's underdeveloped feelings for Stan in a sweet way. He's not trying to jump Stan right after Kyle's funeral, but he's making it clear that he cares.
I'm definately going to suggest this to a friend. He's a South Park slash fan who's been having some trouble ever since he came out to his parents. I think he'd like it.
Anyway, thank you for the mention! And really, it's authors like YOU who give ME hope for humanity. God knows I need some more of that.
| DeadFuzz 9/18/08 . chapter 3
This is so sad
I was fighting back tears the whole way thru and finally when Kenny was talking To Sharon i couldn't hold them in anymore.
This story deserves much more than 6 reviews- If i had my way every body in the world would read this story- its stories like this that help open people minds and put a stop to hate crimes to help overcome their homophobia
Everyone in the synagogue was staring at him, with so many different expressions on their faces; fear mingled with disgust, some with outright shock. Only Kenny gave him a small thumbs-up, with a grin of pride for good measure.
I can see that Kenny's support of Stan and how it lead to love in difficult times- you write really well
Disgust? Its despicable isn't it?
You fall in love with peoples personalities not their gender- how dare they be judged for loving each other?
I love your writing style- please keep it up because i believe that this story should be published- I am not lying to you I'm telling the truth- Your story is one that really makes you think and not judge people.
From Your dedicated reader
omg. .kenny (oo)
| eliska 9/12/08 . chapter 2
I cannot believe I've never stumbled upon this before.
You can't believe how glad I am to finally see a fanfic that actually touches upon gay rights and the insane homophobia that's been rampaging about everywhere. People really need to open their eyes more; it's not like being homosexual is the end of the world.
I actually cried at the end of this chapter; I have only cried three times over fanfiction during these past four years. You are an inspirational and morally upright (IMO) author, and this is a fabulous piece that is both touching and mind-blowing at the same time. I hope your story gains more reviews because it most certainly deserves to; it's saddening to see horrible fics get tons of reviews while truly great authors are overlooked.
Best of luck,
(I would also like to add one last thing, for anyone who happens to come across this review in the review page... WHY AREN'T YOU REVIEWING?)
| alan is stupid 9/11/08 . chapter 2
Homophobia is a pretty emotional subject for me, too. My own parents are both bisexual, and nearly half of my relatives and most of my friends aren't straight-I know people who are gay, lesbian, bisexual, asexual (including myself), transgendered, and pansexual. I'm the president of the LGBT Alliance at my high school, and people come to our meetings all the time saying that they would have joined earlier but they were afraid of being made fun of! It just makes me so frustrated whenever I hear something like that. I'm split between totally giving up or gaining hope for the future of gay rights.
The worst episode of homophobia was the attack on my uncle and his husband a year or so ago. They weren't that badly hurt, but still, they live in Canada! You wouldn't think of Canada as being a hitspot for hate crimes, you know? It seems like this sick hatred is everywhere these days.
Anyway, amazing fic-it actually made me tear up when I realized that the woman was Sheila. Even though I'm not the biggest Style fan, I'll persist because of the message and my fondness of StanxKenny. c:
Brilliant so far. I'm eager for more!
| DeadFuzz 9/11/08 . chapter 2
Dude please stop making me cry! No actually DONT stop making me cry- these stories are so emotionally they make me feel happy to be alive- if u didnt keep going i would feel utterly miserable... I especialy like the part where Sheila tries to stop Stan and he just keeps going... so sad... so emotionally... SO BLOODY ADDICTIVE!