great

Wow! This is a really awesome story! I HAVE GOT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I DO HOPE SUSAN DIES! Oops thats mean isn't it? =)

A very interesting beginning! Why don´t you continue it!?!

Very humorously and engagingly written! Your OC came to life for the reader brilliantly, and characterization seems to be spot-on so far for Susan and Teatime.

Very well done... I hope to see more; I am excited to hear (or rather, read)what happens next!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Continue, please?

You are gifted. You captured the style, the mood of Discworld in a single chapter. I am in awe.
Fabulous story, amazing style, pace and plot.
Teatime was too good a criminal to be killed off so soon, wasn't he?

please update soon :) This is one of my favourite couples although they do slightly scare me

Nice story! I wonder what Teatime will do.. Somehow I think his eye following Susan around is so cute! Please update soon!

Well, wouldn't the poker go right through?
Wizards. Well, at least this one's stupid curiousity did something good: Teatime is back! Yay! *screams traditional fangirl scream at unnervingly high pitch*

*squeepurr* Oh, auri, this is awesome! You are...dwah! English lacks words for such awesomeness! What perfection of prose, such wonderful ficcage! Expect my first chapter forthcoming. As soon as I figure out a title, really XD

Nice beginning!I like your style-you combine suspense and comic relief(like when Susan chases the "marble") . The way you brought Teatime back in the Discworld was interesting...I'm curious as to how you plan to continue this story. Well, there are never enough SusanxTeatime fics!