 Maika Akarui 2008-12-22 . chapter 1That was cute! :D I like the concept. You should watch your spelling and grammar at times. Keep that in mind so you could write even more wonderful fics. :D Best of luck! Keep writing more good stories! |
 jin.toshikazu 2008-09-04 . chapter 1nice job. i like the way you portrayed ino - it's like she always knows more than what sasuke does and all the uchiha can do is listen to her. and i just adore the idea of the german ino! ^_^ i'm asian and i'm proud of it, but a lot of my favorite people are german (like michael schumacher and dirk nowitzki and bastian schweinsteiger) and i just adore german ice cream.
anyway, i'm looking forward to reading more from you.
ja, mata ne. :) |
 Mornings Light 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Cute! ^^
I liked the concept, short and sweet- no pun intended. XD |
 -Your Average Sardonist- 2008-09-03 . chapter 1hehe cute^^ I'm half German half american btw ;D
There were some errors, for example it's "Guten Abend. Ich heiße Ino. Wie heißen Sie?", but otherwise not bad^^ Just very...polite lol.
And if they aren't 17 or older the don't say 'sie', but 'du'.
Sorry for my rambling...^_^'' |
 kljjlkjlkj 2008-09-02 . chapter 1Ahaha. Wow. I usually don't like most AU, but that was really, really, good. Loved it. :] |
 Katrina132 2008-09-02 . chapter 1this was really cute and I liked it a lot.
You should consider a sequel where Ino and Sasuke meet in the same college, or something. |