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Maika Akarui
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
That was cute! :D I like the concept. You should watch your spelling and grammar at times. Keep that in mind so you could write even more wonderful fics. :D Best of luck! Keep writing more good stories!
jin.toshikazu
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
nice job. i like the way you portrayed ino - it's like she always knows more than what sasuke does and all the uchiha can do is listen to her. and i just adore the idea of the german ino! ^_^ i'm asian and i'm proud of it, but a lot of my favorite people are german (like michael schumacher and dirk nowitzki and bastian schweinsteiger) and i just adore german ice cream.

anyway, i'm looking forward to reading more from you.

ja, mata ne. :)
Mornings Light
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Cute! ^^
I liked the concept, short and sweet- no pun intended. XD
-Your Average Sardonist-
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
hehe cute^^ I'm half German half american btw ;D
There were some errors, for example it's "Guten Abend. Ich heiße Ino. Wie heißen Sie?", but otherwise not bad^^ Just very...polite lol.
And if they aren't 17 or older the don't say 'sie', but 'du'.
Sorry for my rambling...^_^''
kljjlkjlkj
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
Ahaha. Wow. I usually don't like most AU, but that was really, really, good. Loved it. :]
Katrina132
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
this was really cute and I liked it a lot.
You should consider a sequel where Ino and Sasuke meet in the same college, or something.
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