Yes. Because there is more to this than just Ron screaming in the basement.

Whoa, excellent! Very chilling, you've showed Bellatrix and her twisted insanity perfectly. You've made me cry.

Poor Ron!

That was a sad one. Poor Ron. Always getting beaten. Oh well, is it bad to say that I love it when he hurts. lol

Wow. This is a really serious piece of work you've written. Bellatrix is so warped and twisted--I could see her saying these things. To treat Ron in such a horrible manner, like a sex slave, beat him and use him for what she wants, that's definitely a form of cruel torture to Hermione. I like how it ends up being just Ron and Hermione in the end, but wow, what they both went through to be with each other in Shell Cottage is heartbreaking. Wonderful fic and I loved every word from beginning to end.

A chilling read, but brilliantly done. I love the manipulation in the title and your word choices/one liners are also great.

Excellent.

The beautiful merging of drama and emotional agony that has made your R/Hrm Fic's so popular with me and others.

Well done.

Wayne

This is fantastically writen! Horrifying and chilling too.

That was brilliant, you're an AMAZING writer and the title was great! x

sniff!

Briliant! - love the sex slave angle - Bella would be ruthless in her torture of Hermione!

this was very very intense. when reading it my insides squirmed. very good though. it makes me shiver..
her rotten teeth sending the stench of years of prison- i love this line its amazing

was no time, not place, no comprehension (no place)

sounding more terrified that she'd ever heard anyone (then)

Amazing.

Well done! You've captured Hermione's strength and Bellatrix's madness both.

I don't understand something, was this an AU of the Malfoy Mannor scene?
I hate Bellatrix...well, who wouldn't! LOL
Bye!

yikes! Bella scares the shit out of me... and wow Hermione for standing up to her!
this is really intense though--in a good/scary way.

...Ron as Bellatrix Lestrange's sex slave? Where did THAT come from?

I suppose I must concede that it's well-written...and at least you're shipping canon...but STILL...depressing much?