thanks for updating! that was a good update, you know worth the wait and all ;D

“But seriously, out of everything that I just told you, the fact that we were holding hands is the only thing you don’t believe?”

“Uh,” he gave a dumb look, raising his eyebrows, “yeah.”

LOL! Really liked that part. Man, the Dark One is scaring me. I love this story, so exhilarating. Your style of writing is unique and I adore the way you wrote his attack on Gabriella. (okay, that sounded weird, I meant I love the way you wrote it...lol). This is just getting more intense by the minute. :)

Shivers all up and down, sad eyes, falling brows. These are all of the symptoms reading this chapter gave me. This was amazing. But imagining T&G all bloody and limp made my throat close up. I would've cried but there were too many people in this room and they would probably think I'm weird. ;) Just crazy beautiful.

Ooh, this is so intriguing. I can't wait to catch up with the rest of these chapters. This actually sounds like a book I read one time called: Dreamrider. Similiar but I'm sure way different storyline. Well, maybe not WAY different.

You know, someone, one of the authors who favorited, suggested you to me and I have to say, she was right in her thinking-I love this! :) This is definitely my kind of story. I like your style. And boy that part with the black cut-out looking up at her with blood-red eyes was CREEPY. But totally excellent. :p

hey

i love this story! its awesome and i love your profile pic zanessa/troyella forever! they are so cute!

did gabi die? i feel so sorry for her...that must have hurt!

I LOVE your banners!

how do you make em? please reply! i wanna make one but dont know how! are you chinese?

anyway! awesome story and cant wait for the next chap!

this story make me tear! beautiful! keep it up!

I absolutely love ur stories.

Okay, is she dead?

FINALLY!

*Gasp*...

Dun dun dun.

OH MY GOSH! I love this story!

Yeah, he kind of is, it better not be Troy, please say it isn't?

That part was cute when she said "I like it when you say my name," EP!

Wait wait wait, this isn't OVER, right? OH MY GOD, NO. It can't be.

Clearly, at least hopefully by my response it is clear that I LOVE THIS STORY. So much. Please update soon. :)

Aaw, this chapter was so sad but so intense at the same time.

Your theory about men in action movies are so true. They have about 10 fights, stabbed, shot and more but they still come out on top at the end so I definitely think this was a good way to end this chapter.

I think she has been out for almost a week and was dreaming the last part before she is to wake up but I am sure that is completely wrong.

Can't wait for the next update, which I hope you do update soon!

Ooh, you are so sneaky and so damn dramatic! I think the even more messed up part is that I love it. On to read the next chapter...