Oh my god, this has to be one of my fave stories of all time! I almost stopped reading when L was shot, becaus I didn't want to see him die like that. Ebony is an amzing character, and I can't wait to read more of your fanfictions. You have an undeniable gift for writing, it can take you far. Keep on writing, my friend!
Hazel Murosoichi

“I have come to gloat.”
Lol, perfect line for L there. Just perfect, no? L being L while Light's tied down like an animal.
Still would have been awesomely epic if Light got free and tried to kill L and Matsuda swooped in and saved the day :D

As i have said in the first story I really love it. This would be the 16th time I read this story

Aw...That was so cuttee~! I loved it! Though this WAS rated M (You didn't post chappy 12 seperatly), it didn't have anything that bad in it. (I didn't read Chappy 12 due to your warning. I didn't want to be mentally scarred again)

It was very exciting, when L was in a coma, i was very worried. (l is mah favorite character!)Anywho, loved the story, you are a very good writer, ni.

-K

I absolutely loved reading this over the couple of days! (Although my teachers didn't ^^;) Thank you so much!The story had everything in it: humor, angst, romance, suspension. Great job!

I'm jealous.. I have a story to finish too, so I know how much time it takes. (But it is fun of course ^^) Loved Ebony! I loved L! I loved your plot :D Your great!
Good luck with the next fic!

Another great job! I'm glad you managed to give a chance for Near too. He's my fave of the group.

because im an idiot when it comes to deviant art, could you please explain to me hoe to acsess the pictures?

i feel really stupid asking, but i really want to ses them.

loved the ending by the way.

it was over-all a very good story. actually, i stayed up so i could finish it. i believe it is around 2:25 am now.

awsome job!

Aw, it's over :(
I love love love this story!
So cute :)

Alright, I have just finished Rules Set In Love: Notebook 2, having finished Notebook 1 first of course, and must say that I loved it! lol I have gotten addicted to for a while and can't stop reading stories on here. It's kinda funny because some of the stories I read I haven't watched that much of the storyline on the TV or read all the books, which ever one counts for the story I've read, but I find when I'm done reading one of the stories here that I have learned a little bit more about the section I have watched or read from the previous creators.

I have to say that I'm very impressed with your style as a writer. I really like it! lol Not to mention I think Ebony and L's first daughter, Rem, has to be my favorite character in the entire story line. lol Anyway, this is a really long review. I hope you have time to actually read it all. lol Thank you for the entertainment!

- A. Moonbeam

I couldn't help myself. At the ending of this chapter:
I laughed.
And laughed.
And laughed some more.
LOL Happy birthday, Light! You get an L!
HAHA! I think I cracked a rib from laughing so hard!

Spottedstar106

YAY sequel sorry about the long review for the first's last chapter but i loved your story

Rem should tear up the notebook just to prove the 'rule' wrong. Plus she's a little kid,even if L's her dad;and little kids love to tear stuff up. Plus it would be funny to watch/read everyone freaking out thinking they're gonna die and her looking all innocent:"What I do?"

Loved it!
:)

Hello, I found your story complete so I decided to review it all now! I think I might like your story better than the series...though I also might just have a love for happy endings :).. Anyway thankyou for writing this wonderful story! -LAG ;p

HI! Okay, honestly, I don't know where to start with this! This... is... GRAH. Okay. So I started reading last week and I just finished and this is by far the most amazing, well-written, entertaining, heart-wrenching, unique, absolutely FANTASTIC LxOC, Death Note fic, fic in general that I have ever read. Seriously. Ebony was an amazing character and the part-Shinigami twist was amazing! It kept me on my toes for so long and you obviously worked very hard to make it so good, and I appreciate it :) L was ridiculously in-character, Light was portrayed as the uber-jackass that he is (Oh I love it). And Rem (the human :p) was amazing! So cute. I loved this so so much and I would totally ask you to write more amazing LxOC if I didn't know that this much have taken so much work :) So GO YOU! And thank you for this awesome story!