Wow. This is depressing but hopeful at the same time. I still like it through.
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Whoa!! XD
Not that I read slow, because I don't, but this took me two hours to read!! XD
AWESOME!!
No story I have ever read (especially not a one-shot) took so long!! That makes me happy!! :D
This was REALLY FANTASTIC, by the way. :P

I must say, that ending is so sweet. I've never really liked slash or incest but this one was really well-written and the underlining emotions (the sadness, pain, hurt, anger, etc.) were wonderful. You have true writing talent. I loved the one-shot. Also loved Murtagh's nasty sense of humor and how he talks to people, like the council and how he adds things in his mind. Very amusing. =)

*sighs* i actually thought this was really good and well written up untill th parts that made murtagh out to be gay. why couldnt you have just left that crap out? what is it with evry one on here? i mean, some of thm just cant write a decent story o save their life anyway, but you can! so dnt waste it on THIS LIE

wow this rendered me speechless, i think it is so emotional in spite of Murtagh being so distant. the sadness that underlies this fic makes it so powerful and well read.

hey loved ur story and its sequel

o this story was wonderful. i love how you showed eragon groen up. this story was great i can see it happening and i picture eragon being this way after everything is finally over. i would hvae loved a little more detailed intimacy scenes but i can use my imagination. none the less thanks for the lovel read

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there dead like DEAD wat the hell but it was an AMAZING story

That... was... amazing... *starry eyes*

This oneshot was so good! When I first saw it I was like "oh, a 15k word oneshot. That's kinda cool." And then I read it and it was awesome! I love how you characterized Eragon and Murtagh, and I love the way you had them "fall for eachother" realisticly. You could have written the story without the addition of the dragon eggs, but I think that they make the oneshot even better. All in all, I could gush over this story (the comedy, the fluff, the angst, the kawai) for a long time, but I think I'll just leave you with a simple: This oneshot was amazing and I can't think of a single thing to say... Except...

Does that mean that Counter Clockwise will be E/M? *suggestive wink*

Wow that was amazing. The perfect mix of humour, angst, friendship and romance. I loved it.
Keep up the good work and thanks for the great read!

Gah, I love this fic. a) because it's a long one-shot and b) because of the ideas presented in it. I loved how you didn't go for the 'everything is fine' ending after your Eragon defeated Galbatorix. Good plot, love it.

I loved this story. Not only because this is one of my favorite pairings but also because of all the emotions it contained. It was the kind of fic that made me laugh, shake my head and cry and as such one i consider very well written. If you can get the readers to get into a story, then you've reached an important goal (or so i believe).
And I liked bastard Murtagh XD He was just fun to read :P

kya! that was probably one of THE BEST era/mur stories i've ever read!! you had really good plot (in a one-shotish way) development, and i liked how you took the story really slowly. it may have taken you all night, but it was definately worth it. i'm not really a fan of ERAGON+ but this story just made my day. (and it turned me into a cliche monster) *squeals* it wasn't very cutesy, but it made me super super happy. thanks for your hard work on such a great story!!

gah -brain fizzs out- i dont think i can even explain how wonderfully amazing this story was, it was soo wel written its unbelievable especially for a one shot i mean holy shit i feel like i just read a 30 chapter story or something i seriously cant tell you how much i loved this story except that i really loved it, it was written amazingly well, the whole plot and stuff was so original and the story was just so so good and made me want to cry and just amazing.

This was great! :3 It was amazing- I absolutely LOVE your fics, especially Counter Clockwise. However, I must ask- have you read Brisingr? If so, what are you going to do about the little /thing/ we find out regarding the central characters you write about? XD

But besides that... I hope you continue to write awesome stories! ^_^

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