This is a good start! I really love the scene in the end. I really hope you would continue this.

I'm interested in reading where you take this... My only real question is about what's going to be happening with Hedwig in regards to being human, having magic, making 'advances' on Harry, and then turning back into an owl... I hope you update soon.

Interesting story, I liked that you made Hedwig human (I'm guessing she has a magic now? :-)). I also like the idea of him jumping to more worlds. Really looking forward to more, thanks for the read.

Great story so far, I love the girl hedwig idea.

This world seems eerily familiar to the one you ended The Girl Who Lived with. Do I smell a possible crossover? Or am I just reading too much into things? I believe it's up to you to decide.

I look forward to more stellar works from you.

p.s. Both Stargate and Sliders are acceptable deffinitions to the word 'awesome.'

I like your story a lot, partially because I do like the dimensional aspect (yay sliders!), and I do think it's well written, but the biggest reason I like it is Hedwig. As long as she's written decently, she's one of my absolute favorite characters, and I especially like stories where either Harry has an owl form, or Hedwig herself gets transformed in some way.
Anyway, I really like what you have here so far, and I really hope to see some more someday.

*cracks up* Oh this was priceless.

-ZI

I love this. Hedwig is adorable.

You know who Hedwig reminds me of? Ariel in the Little Mermaid when she's human. She's all weirdly (but understandably) inept, but Eric likes her anyway. :)

this looks neat
keep it up

Love this fic - the Hedwig twist was very fun. It's good that you're moving through fast, and not getting bogged down. I suppose the time intervals where Harry is stranded in whatever alternate reality will vary, given the length of time to the next solar eclipse thing. It's such a fun premise! Can't wait till you update again!

xo

Good chapter. Are you going to have the same thing happen to Harry that happened in Sliders? Will he keep on going to new worlds and never return?

Also, will Hedqig become human again? I've not seem many of those before.

Pretty good. I used to watch Sliders and loved it.

I wish you left hedwig alone.I rather liked the human hedwig and i don't think it has been done before.
sorry about my english.

So, is this the end of human!Hedwig?

Always,
Robert Mason

Very nice so far! I loved the first world! I hope this will eventually be Harry/Hedwig!