AW!
I love it!
Who knowns, maybe Hiashi might actually care about Hinata and those actually are his thoughts.
I love it! Great writting!

ah. that made me really sad. i really liked it. i just didn't like the fact that it was Neji she was marring. i not a very big fan of incest.

CUTE! Is there more? I think I would have liked it better without lyrics though, But great!

It is a beautiful story.

I love the way you've portrayed Hinata, her characterisation hasn't been lost but also let her grow up and find her place. And it's nice that it seems her dad is starting to realise the mistakes he has made. And I also love that it's not a Naruto and Hinata pairing.
So thakyou for your writing.