 sundayrain26 2009-08-24 . chapter 12I think my brain just may have exploded at the mental image of Wilson and Chase kissing. o-o In a good way.
And, I feel necessary to point out that I'll probably be using these monikers in my head from now on. XD Hoping I can keep them in my head. I get the feeling I would get some weird looks if I called House 'Lover.' XD
So far, I'm in love with this story. Really well written. I was hooked from the first chapter. =) |
 Hallow Eve 2009-08-21 . chapter 15I forgot to put this in my other review so I'll put it here. I probably wouldn't have minded all the sex if they hadn't been all "f**k yeah baby" to each other. It was just a thought that I forgot to put into my other review because while I did enjoy the story I didn't much like this factor but I want you to know that while I didn't enjoy that aspect it didn't take away from the story or decrease my overall like for the tale. I hope somehow this makes sense to you. |
 Hallow Eve 2009-08-21 . chapter 16Your story was so interesting it pulled me right in from the first chapter. However, because I'm not going to lie, I was pretty, reluctant? disgusted?, by all the threesomes and what not. I don't think House would ever do it with Foreman. Maybe Chase. Probably Wilson. I wish there had been more of a warning in the early chapters for that. But your story was so engrossing I was caught up in it anyway. I very much like how you allowed House's personality to shine in such a dark place.
I remember my favorite part was:
Chase: Yeah, you've certainly changed.
House: Bite me.
Chase: And you're the mature one.
I spent five minutes giggling over this, I swear.
And also:
House: we pretty much got naked and fucked like homo-bunnies.
I could definitely see House saying Homo-bunnies XD |
 xopollyxo307 2009-07-15 . chapter 16This story was the best story i have ever read. loved it XD |
 Fudgebuckets 2009-04-20 . chapter 16This an amazing story! You've created this so I wish so badly for them to make out okay. You've made me feel for them in a big way. Thanks so much for sharing! |
 Horcrexhexer 2009-01-27 . chapter 9I like the stiry, it's unconventional and that keeps it ininteresting. But AB is not a rare blood type, he's a universal reciever. That means that any blood type, A, B, AB, or O, can be safely transfused into him. I think you were thinking of blood type O, which will only accept blood of the same kind. I know, suspend your disbelief. But this one thing just really kind of irked me. A disease that kills woman an blue eyes males? No problem. Men getting pregent? Okay! Mess up a blood type? My worl comes crashind dowm. Sorry. Great story so far! |
 Bloodmoon-Shinigami 2009-01-25 . chapter 16Bravo! I don't know if you could make this any better than it is. Simply beautiful. I'm glad Wilson got a baby; I was hoping he would.
You've created an AU that I could never forget. |
 Bloodmoon-Shinigami 2009-01-24 . chapter 15OMG, two babies. And does Lover already know he's got a girl in there? I wonder if his body is prepared for the delivery of something larger than the sac...
Still enjoying this much. |
 Bloodmoon-Shinigami 2009-01-24 . chapter 14Gods, girl, you are a g. I started this story with hopes of something interesting and you have not let me down. I must admit that I normally avoid male-preg stories, but I'm completely in support of the plot-point for this one. You caught me. I am also not a big fan of threesomes, other than the occasional smutty break from the norm, but you certainly have made it work in this. I loved the Chocolate-Lover-Pretty circle you had going, and it feels so natural! Then, not only did you gain whole-hearted support from me for a triad couple, but you threw in Locks in such a manner that I accepted the new foursome! Your sex scenes are so damn hott, too.
On another side of things, you also have a very clear way of describing the characters and their situations. You write very well. Much love from me to you. |
 Laibrarian's Journey 2009-01-19 . chapter 16OH MY GOD...that's all I can really say, and let me tell you, this story is worth writing that all out. I still can't believe that I just read that...you know that feeling you get, like when you get off a REALLY awesome roller-coaster, or just came back from an amazing trip? That's what I'm feeling right now. I am amazed at the world that you were able to create, and although I must admit I was a little leery at first, after, oh, chapter 2, I couldn't stop reading... This is honestly amazing. I read alot (not just fanfiction) and this story gave me the feeling of a well-written book, one that I just couldn't put down. God, it's one am, and I have class tomorrow, but I'm SERIOUSLY considering reading the sequel, because if this was the first story, I can only imagine what the next one is about (probably just as awesome, if not more). ANYway, I really enjoyed reading this, and even though I thought some of the medical jargon was hard to understand, and the beginning a little vague on who was who, and even the conditions/ explanation of WHY/HOW this world came to be a little confusing, that all melted away when I read a little further. I really enjoyed the descriptions and scenes that you portrayed here, and the characterization was spot on (for the post-apocalypse world that they had to survive in, since I'm sure that would change people and their outlooks on life).
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Whew, glad I got that off my chest.
Thanks for the GREAT story. :) |
 Bloodmoon-Shinigami 2009-01-18 . chapter 2"Jimmy needs a consult." How cute!
I guessed that Chocolate would be Foreman around the end of the first chapter and it seems to fit, strangely. The old ways have gone with this new world and a triad seems like the best way to go. It provides strength and stability unlike a pair can. I wonder how Baby is going to feel about saving this "Scarred Man." |
 Bloodmoon-Shinigami 2009-01-17 . chapter 1Just read chapter 1 and I think I've found something incredibly unique. It is so interesting and drew me in quickly. This world is such a sad, vacant place with people just trying to keep moving and nobody caring about actually living. The living was over long ago. Now it's all about needs and time.
I hope you intend to eventually finish this story. I certainly plan to read it. |
 Sagestar12 2009-01-01 . chapter 1For all of you who leave negative comments:
That just shows you read it.
It was a pretty good story, but I kept forgetting that some of the murses were male. lol |
 Kitty Nekkyo 2008-12-29 . chapter 16This story is weird but awesome. At first I thought I wouldn't like it but as I read more, the more I got addicted. This story is awesome! It will probably be one of those stories I reread a couple times a year. |
 GeeLady 2008-12-29 . chapter 16From GEELADY:
Thanks to all my readers who take the time to leave a kind review or, even if it's a critique, who take the time to explain WHY they don't like this or that. All such comments are either encouraging or helpful.
But I have disabled anonymous reviews, not because I mind negative reviews, not at all - I'll accept any critique that TELLS ME SOMETHING, but because of the useless reviews.
Everyone is entitled to an opinion. But there really does need to be an opinion for it to have meaning and
opinion only comes with sufficient knowledge.
I am a three times published author and as such have acquired a very thick skin since, for the most part, people don't hold back from letting me know whether or not they like my work. A writer soon learns that not everyone will like their work and I'm okay with that to the 'nth degree.
But an eight word review that is nothing more than a childish rant or a blurb stating personal disgust because the story doesn't match your moral view of the world or is too "weird" - those reviews are worse than useless and will no longer be allowed.
I also believe a review left after a single chapter has been read is an emotional and short sighted reaction at best.
Those who wish to leave a private rant, feel free to send me a private message or leave a public one here - that's fine with me - I'm a big girl.
The reactions of one or three angry or abusive readers have never nor will ever stop me from working my craft.
In short - meaningless or rude comments are more embarassing for you than me. |
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