LOVE IT!!

love your story, i think it is very well written and i think you do a very good BB ^^

Oh, you simply must continue with this.

I'm reviewing for the first chapter even though I've read the whole story because I'm worried that I won't have any room left for anymore of my thoughts and praise for this wonderful fanfic of yours.

The way you write BB is dead-on. He's insane, he's two-faced, he's unpredictable, he's childish, he's a cold-blooded killer, he's got an inferiority complex - you as an author have captured it all within these chapters. The same goes for Naomi Misora. Normally, I find infidelity (regardless how it is justified) repulsive, and I tend to despise a character because of their dishonesty in a relationship, but I just can't bring myself to hate Naomi. I don't know if it has to do with her spark, or if it's the way you write her, but I enjoy reading everything about Naomi the way you present her - tough, but vulnerable, cynical, but funnily sarcastic at the same time. It's hard for BB to resist a gal like that ;)

So anyways, that's all I can think of to ramble about for now. If anymore thoughts come by I will be sure to pester you lol.

Oh, and I was wondering if it would help you get your muse back for this story if I did some fanart? I can't promise anything that will take your breath away, but I will try my best if it would help you. ^^

Keep up with the updates, please?

~AmEva

I've just read the first two chapters this far, and I really like it. B is a little odd, but then, he really is a little odd, and he's a very difficult character to write at all. I usually see him done pretty badly, and you've done a decent job here.

The set-up, though, and the plot twists are really quite good, and seem to hint at a lot of potential to come. You've really set things up nicely in your first two chapters.

Thanks for writing this! Very nice overall!

This is REALLY good. I hope you haven't abandoned this story.

ARGGH! THIS IS SO NOOT FAIR!1 CLIFHANGERS! , MY MORTAL ENEMY! ohyh pls undate ill place u on faves and on alerts but u have got to upadte! i just luv B! u like him too! so YOU MUST KNOW WAHT IT FEELS LIKE ! PLZ UPDATE!

ps this story: rocks my world!

Dude, This is a really great story. I love how you can take a serious situation and make it funny or vice-versa, but man those psychiatrists are RETARDED for letting Beyond out with a clean slate. It will be interesting to see how this situation turns out.

XD I love your Beyond. I read a lot of Beyond fan fiction before I finally got my hands on Another Note and I must say I was surprised at how OCC he was in fan fics. Not to say that he isn't crazy, but he was just so much more than a lunatic.

I think you capture him well in this story.

I really love this story

I've been waiting for a half decent BBxNaomi rape fic for a while now

I hope your going to be updating it soon

I just want to point out that nonplussed means 'surprised/confused', not 'unaffected'. It was making me a bit confused, myself, after encountering it twice now in the wrong context...

Great chapter, though. I was very taken aback when I first found out that Naomi was seriously considering B's proposal. Odd indeed. But I was not surprised to find that she was already fucking L--that's totally understandable.

I'm really surprised that I haven't heard of this fic before now... In fact, I'm so interested that I'm glowing with joy!

I absolutely love the way you've made Beyond. He's a perfect mixture between his known insanity and the character he presented in the LABB Murder Cases. I love their little "casual" conversation. Slightly tense, with Naomi's obvious air of dislike, and B's creepy interest and flattery.

B being released is a little shaky, though... He murdered quite a bit of people, and I'm not sure if even B's level of acting could convince his captors that he was better. I'm not complaining, however, since I get to see him in action, but I'm still not entirely convinced that it would be that easy.

It does suck that B can't emulate L's appearance as well now because of the scars, but Mello got scars and he was still sexy (in an edgy way--much like how B inquired about to Naomi).

I can't wait for all the things that are going to happen... This is such a great setup. My glee is uncontainable.

It makes sense that Naomi would be training L, and I can't wait to see how their little relationship is going, too.

This? This story is beyond belief. (hehe, Beyond.)
I love it. It's, like, one of the best Beyond fanfics I've ever read.
Really, it is.
Good job. Now add some more.
In case you're wondering "Who the heck is this nut?" it's Elena Hitachiin.
And even though my review won't cause you to have some kind of mental breakthrough for the story...
I can still tell you that this is one heck of a fanfic.

sadly I would most likely be the nurse in this story. I would fall for Beyond's charm even if it was all calculated manipulation to get me to trust him and believe he was being cured by the clinics methods. Is it sad that I find it somewhat touching that beyond warned the nurse about when she was going to die even if it wasn't outright. He would have sounded insane if he had told her the meaning behind his warning, It also might have been taken as a threat on her life.

this is awesome so far!

update soon!

I love this story! The conversations between Naomi and Beyond are really funny.