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Reviews for: Sweet Sixteen
TwilightRocker55
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
LOL : " A strawberry? Why the hell would she want a fruit?" I laughed so hard I cried. Halarious!
Seedharry
2009-03-13 . chapter 1
Rangiku gave Orihime a bag
sara-sakura101forever
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
lingerie? :D?
IchigoRenji
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
they are both great, if I'd have to choose, I'd choose both ^_^
Mitsukistar
2008-09-18 . chapter 1
This was so wonderful! I loved it! It was so great!^-^ IchiHime is lovely
RyuEtoku
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
this was an awesome story both versions^^ i enjoyed reading them and will read them again in the future XD and i think rangiku gave orohime a buzz buzz o.o;;
Starfire-hime
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
Wow, this was a really cute story! I just love how dense Ichigo can be, I mean, c'mon "strawberry," ICHIGO!! Though I'm totally in love with the strawberry pendent idea. Great job! Now to read the lemon!! ::wink, wink::

P.S.: Rangiku's present. . .yeeaah. . .I think I can guess what it is. . . . ::buzz,buzz::
Atemu'sLotus
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Hahaha...
I love the Strawberry joke. Very nice.

Awesome job!
Thanks for writing!
WinterVines
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Well, I read both, and I like both versions. One has a sweeter ending, but the other is just as funny. The kissing thing in the original was good, and I liked how she wouldn't untie him in the other one. All in all, they were both good. Thanks for sharing! -KG
Mortimerscross
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
very sweet
Alastor Vega
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Lovely job. It was funny doing Ichigo conversation with Kon and Hollow Ichigo.
Darth Hawk 32
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
I haven't read the lemon yet, I'm doing that one next. But this one is pretty good.
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