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Biggest Hinata Fan Ever
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
throu the whole story Ichigo was so dum howw can he not know what his own name means and figure it out, but that's what made it good v(^^)v
ZZeronorth
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
This story is grade A+ lemon. Take a bow my friend. I see you have other stories and all but I believe this to be the best I've looked over. Your other stories are great don't get me wrong but this one has the flow and the smut I yearn for in M rated fics.

I especially adored when Orihime refused to untie Ichigo at first. She finally grew some balls and took the initiative. Good job Inoue and good job Spice3132.

Take care and continue to write until your heart's content. Bye bye now. :)
urbanaddition
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
let me guess Rangiku gave Orihime a...dildo and or vibrator, right?!
where do you come up with these stories?!?
IchigoXorihime1471
2009-04-19 . chapter 1
i think it a pregantcy test lol
Yenoh
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
lawl.this story was funny and sexy.it made me laugh that ichigo doesnt even get the strawberry thing.he's so slow. and btw,i didnt know orihime was aggresive..? though i can imagine orihime straddling him ^^;;
BreeSS
2009-02-21 . chapter 1
... did Rangiku give her a vibrator??
animeghurl1
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
good idea^^
Goodiife
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
haha.."she loves strawberries"... ichigo is so innocent.. but the whole story was great! *thumbs up* :)
sara-sakura101forever
2008-12-13 . chapter 1
both are great :D
Johnny
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Damn! WOW THAT WAS SEXY AS FUCK DUDE!
Dang wow. I was so needing an erotic ichime story. It was excellent in a literary sense too. Excellent foreshadowing, awesome suspense, written in a way that is easy to follow. Overall a perfect job. I'll go read the first one now. Thanks so much for writing this! Wow!

Ps: I hope ichi either used a condom or cummed outside of her!
HellsPastry
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Lemons for lulz. This may have been lemon but it was nice and fluffy. I laughed a good bit when Ichigo didn't get the strawberry joke the entirety of the story. Also I speculate that Rangiku gave Orihime a Gameboy. Good writing mate.
DOMINATION230
2008-09-25 . chapter 1
Damn your really good at these
IllusiveWiinter
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
it really is sad how dense ichi-kun is
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LIKE THIS STORY, NOT BAD.
Azure Zangetsu
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
Hehe! I thought it was great. Nice!
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