*golf clap* So spectacular, really great job on this.
-Lecture

I love the contemplative feel of this story, and how it explores the dynamics between Mikami and Light. You have them down to a 't.' And that last line particularly made me smile, for some reason. It's so...humorously human.

O hay thar u, 'tis cerulean_chains from LJ.

I really enjoyed this story, despite the logistics problem of getting Mikami and Light in the same room at any point before their demise (which is a major reason as to why I typically avoid this pairing like the bubonic plague, regardless of my own fascination with the idea. But since you were the author in this case, I decided an exception was in order). I like the flow of the narrative, and the fact that it's detailed enough to be sexy, but vague enough to be sensual.

Very well rendered story, my dear. You're going on my short list of DN authors that don't suck, and I hope to read more from you in the future.

Master and Servant.

Teehee. I loved it. It's just... what I love to read. Your style is amazing.

It's beautiful :) I like how you portrayed Mikami struggling between his sacrificial faith and his humanly desire. It would have been interesting if it was multi-chaptered, and you should definitely continue it if you have a chance!

makes me want to see a second chapter to find out if their relationship progresses. good chapter by the way, I loved the detail you gave it without getting to graphic--not a lot of people can do that.

I've only recently become a fan of this pairing and your story only enforces my support. Your characterizations of Mikami and Light were perfect. Well done!

I like this pairing; I just wish there were more fics that used it. Anyway, this was a very interesting one-shot. I think you captured Light's and Mikami's emotions very well. I enjoyed reading it.

Wow! This was great! it really expressed what Mikami as to Light and the other way around! I especially loved this line:

"He had been so absorbed by his task, so consumed by the world and its future, that he had forgotten to live."

It felt so... gritty but it was pure Teru! The end strayed a bit from the general feeling of the story but it was still great, well done!

OMG! I love it! you should right a 2nd chapter!

THANK YOU NOTE FROM ME

thank you so much for this story, you may not quiet understand but this story struck a chord in me, it echoed and bounced through memory and feeling, it opened a gate somewhere and let out a flood, i thank you for these words for they flow in my blood.

-annie(if you ever write a sequel i would be eternally grateful)

;D

KAMIJO APPROVES.

squee~!
This was wonderful. I... I lack appropriate describing words to explain how fulfilling this fic was.
It was beautifully vivid, and just... yeah.
IT'S AWESOME; FOR SERIOUS.
MikaLight is love. =]

I've been meaning to read this for a while, I wish I'd got round to it sooner now!

I have to admit that before now I don't think I've ever read a story of this pairing, probably because I tend to focus on the first arc a little more, but y'know I think I'm gonna have to start looking into this. It was really beautifully written and totally brought out Light's humanity, which in my opinion seems to get a little lost in the scheme of things through some of the second arc.

I loved reading this, well done :D

Honestly, Nina... Light and Mikami are both so painfully IC in their private moment that it is not even funny. O__O The tone and pace are wonderfully in tune with each other and it is so tastefully written!

[He had been so absorbed by his task, so consumed by the world and its future, that he had forgotten to live.]

I love this simple line. You understand Light's world, my goodness, you really do. ;_;