Owao. Anorexia's a touchy topic, but I feel you wrote this really well--I can totally see Edgeworth doing something like that. And Phoenix played a really good concerned friend. Cute. :) Um, I'm just a little confused though.. At the end, what happened w/ Franziska? .. Did she do the same thing? I think that's it, but it's a little vague.. anyway! Nice story! :D

Loved this. *_* I usually don't know what to think about fanfics in which there are major problems/accidents/diseases/character deaths, etc. I sometimes think stories should be interesting without major plots like those, but I didn't really think so in this case. It's refreshing to have the PW characters act like... humans. I mean, they *are* very likeable characters one can relate to far from perfection, even in canon.

What I liked best was Phoenix remembering the sandwiches with peach preserves (and Miles asking why he rememembers such stupid things, smiling XD) and Franziska's list. Really cute and touching. =3

aw cute!

This is the very first Phoenix Wright fanfic that I have ever read...and I must say thank you for starting me out with a really, really excellent one. =) The characterization in this fic is masterful, the descriptions succinct, and the plot well-paced with a clear beginning, middle and an end. The story premise isn't one I would have even considered (Edgeworth just looks way too muscular to have such a problem, LOL) but it works perfectly for this fic.

Oh, and note that I also usually don't really go for malexmale pairings...but I think this one's really sweet and touching as you've portrayed it. Wonderful job, thanks for a great first-fanfic experience with the PW universe.

~Threshie

This is...wow. Just amazing. It makes me want to hug the screen, it's that amazing. And it's very well written.

And Edgeworth with anorexia really does make too much sense. (and it's pretty sad.) I hadn't really thought about it until I read the fic, but it makes A LOT of sense. o.o