 DGMfreak5 2009-11-08 . chapter 12OK, L-O-V-E it! I love the way you used the prompt to create a really detailed and awesome plot and as usual, I loved the Phoenix/Edgeworth and Klavier/Apollo stuff. Thanks so much for this awesome fic! |
 Firey-Moonlight 2009-10-11 . chapter 12Amazing story, such a simple but effective plot! The moments where Klavier missed Apollo and felt really guilty really got to me. Near the end, when Apollo was being his blunt self, I really started laughing. After the gloomy mood, the humour was so much stronger. The mention of KristophPhoenix and MilesPhoenix also made my day. You should write more Phoenix Wright stories! |
 Lalaith_raina 2009-09-01 . chapter 11 Man, I found this on LJ, on the kink meme. I was actually pointed to it by someone on the kyodoroki site, where there was a post asking for fic recs.
This story literally had me crying - multiple times. It was absolutely beautifully written, with amazing characters (who didn't have me banging my forehead on the desk in frustration at how OOC they were), and a simply awesome storyline.
There were some parts that just stuck out to me, and I have to compliment individually; like the pillow thing? Ugh. That was so beautiful - one of my crying moments, actually. Both when he first curled up with it in Apollo's bed, and when Phoenix brought it for him. And when Apollo showed up in court - that was also just such a great set of dialogue and emotion. I can't say enough how well done your characterizations were.
Now that this story has kept me from reading to do for classes, I'm off to do homework. But I just wanted to take the moment to applaud you and let you know I'll be stalking your other stories. c: |
 StolenCat 2009-07-31 . chapter 12Found this through the kink meme, and I have to say, this story is probably the best story I have ever read for this fandom. Thanks for writing a wonderful fic for my favorite pairing. x) |
 Sailor Comet 2009-05-20 . chapter 1I found this on the kink meme and christ, I'm another one of those people who didn't really care about Apollo/Klavier before but now, DAMN that was a fantastic fanfic, handled so well on all points right up to the end. EXCUSE MY INCOHERENCY but wow, thank you for writing this. |
 silverfae 2009-05-03 . chapter 12Just read this on the kink meme in one sitting, and.. and.. I have no words. I absolutely loved it, and though I'm not usually a fan of K/A, this fic definitely revised my opinion of it. Major love for Phoenix's angle on family as well as the hints of (so wonderfully comfortable) P/E in the main story, and the omake was just the icing on a wonderful, wonderful cake. I don't think I have anything to say that people haven't already said - spot-on characterisation, lovely dialogue, gorgeous writing and pacing overall, a well-fleshed-out case.. <3
Amazing job. Thumbs up for a beautifully-written piece. |
 Mewgar 2 2009-05-01 . chapter 12Okay, I just traveled here via the kink meme (my LJ is "skibalovesya"), and now I must unload all my emotions here.
I have to say, first off, that I wish I wasn't so emotionally disconnected. Right now I feel inside I should be bawling, but outside, I just can't physically make myself cry. I *want* to cry so badly! This fic is all kinds of amazing, and if this version has rewritten parts, I guess I MUST reread the fic! AND I WILL, when it's not 5:15 AM and I need to sleep.
Now. I love the beginning, love the way that Klavier is floating on cloud nine and just wants his little Forehead to come dance with him. And Apollo... when he asked for help... my heart gave a wrench.
As the story continued, and if not for my tiredness I would be citing things more clearly, I would have these heartwrench moments more and more often. I collapsed into gasping fits sometimes, and there was one point where I started making a sound similar to a dog whine in the back of my throat that I couldn't stop for the life of me. I came very close to bursting out sobbing, but for my own stupid physical reasons, couldn't, much as I wanted and needed to.
I also called Roc and Xenia, and Payne being the prosecutor later on. So totally called them both.
I really, really, really need to get my paws on Apollo Justice (once I get home and go to a Gamestop that ISN'T sold out of it OMG ANGUHREE-FAIC D:< ), because despite all the people telling me about how the writing and characterization sucks, I LIVE in fandom, in my own little fantasy world, and this fandom has never once disappointed me. As long as great writers like you continue to persist, my IRL collection of favorite fics (which, I can tell you right now, consists of so few of the thousands of fics I have read, I can count them on my hands) will continue to grow exponentially.
I wish I wasn't so ineloquent (DESPITE IT NOT BEING A WORD, SHUDDUP FIREFOX) at this time, so I could express all my favorite things. When I go home and have access to a printer, I will print out this fic, encircle my favorite parts, and comment fully on everything I feel. It just needs to be said, I can't not praise the ** out of you for being so incredibly talented.
TL;DR THIS FIC IS AWESOME ILU. |
 Reviewer dude 2009-03-07 . chapter 12 OMG. OMG.
This was amazing! I read this on the meme and didn't know there was an omake. >__> Haha, Trucy's line at the end was adorable as well. It was a nice finishing touch that ended this fic- which weighed heavily on my heartstrings- and made it end on a lighter note. It made me choke from tears here and there, mu ;__;
I loved it so much~ I bookmarked your profile page and'll check for new fics from now on! |
 Kristina Johansson 2009-02-09 . chapter 11Aw! I found this story on the kink meme last night and read it straight through. I brought the laptop to bed and didn't turn the lights off until I had finished it. ^^
A kind soul directed me to this and now I can save this story forever and every. :-)
It's one of my favorite PW fics ever. Thanks! |
 Mernha 2008-11-25 . chapter 12Simply gorgeous.
This review is late, actually.
I found your fanfic at like, eleven at night and stayed up until three AM to finish reading it, because I simply could not stop and put it down, no matter how tired I was.
Blah. Five hours of sleep. Hooray for me! -shot-
ANYWAY, I thoroughly enjoyed it, you write these two so well. I loved all the serious little bits and all the regret. Man, it was so touching at the end. =D
Keep up the good work. I'm really glad you took that prompt, even though you don't ship Polly and Klavier. Gave me plenty to chew on last night. ^-^ |
 tantei39kunoichi 2008-10-21 . chapter 12Excellent piece of work!! I love the splice of humor you put into with the drama genre you had, especially the epilogue and omake. XD All in all, you are awesome. =D |
 baby-pnut 2008-10-15 . chapter 12Poor Trucy! She's going to have to put up with that for a long time... XD This story is so awesome! Your writing style is really good, and I think you portrayed the characters so well that its like part of the real story O.o Phoenix is a lawyer again, yay! the EdgeworthXphoenix is a bonus! *FAVES* |
 spiritualized 2008-10-06 . chapter 11Aw. I liked the implication of Phoenix+Toilet. xD That's really canon.
And also the ending, Apollo of course not really getting the family-thing, which is more like an insider between Phoenix and Klavier. *hurries off to read the omake* and then it's over! T__T |
 spiritualized 2008-10-06 . chapter 10*lol* I just HAVE to review now before I forget... even though I can't wait to read on.
I've first read this story to chapter 3 some weeks ago... and I continued today and couldn't stop. This story became something that I really love... especially the dialogue is brilliant and PW-worthy! XD There are two scenes which I really, really loved. The first one is in the chapter where Klavier is in solitary cell and asks Phoenix why he isn't mad at him to which Phoenix replies that he IS mad at Klavier, but he thinks Klavier is hurting and adding more pain would only make him make more mistakes. That part was just... pure love X__X
And the second one... the last few sentences in this chapter *lol* It's so great to have Edgeworth here! I always wondered what he would be like and I was really disappointed he didn't appear in AJ. And the imagination of how Edgeworth would get along with Klavier is very interesting... I also love seeing the vulnerable part of Klavier, because... yeah, I guess he lacks a bit character development after finding out that his friend and brother are murderers.
Oh, and just two things I noticed, since I'm german. XD You write it "Fräulein", not "Fraülein" and it's "Gute Nacht"... but besides that, great work! *_* |
 Lucathia Rykatu 2008-09-15 . chapter 12The way you wrote Klavier is just absolutely amazing. The court scenes were amazing too, and you had me laughing at Payne as the prosecutor for the case (and Klavier's explanations for why Payne gets assigned cases like these!). I was captivated throughout. |
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