I'm crying...Its too hard to imagine Gai dead...this is incredibly touching and explains Team Gai's relationship so well...applause :'3

I love the emotional pull in this, the distraught and the sadness and the feeling of being dragged around in a hopeless battle to win.

Everything is so exhilarating and lively, I can't imagine being stuck in Tsukiyomi, though I wonder what Tenten saw.

Great job!

It's been a while since I read the first part of this trilogy so i had to read it again. It's great that you've expanded on the the previous story, enabling us to see some of the details of how things came to be. You truly have a way with words - the emotions were clearly conveyed, and as a reader, I was affected by your writing. I loved how you ended this second installment - I think it conveyed a very powerful message. Your characterisation of Team Gai and the portrayal of their dynamics is truly wonderful - I look forward to more Team Gai fics from you. You're an amazing writer. :)

i was crying so hard. you captured the moment so well. it's such a gorgeous piece; thank you so much for writing this.

Hey, you know kioko? She writes for Percy Jackson fandom, and your writing is a lot like hers. Wonderful voice, great styles, nice layout and organization. Good job.

After reading this, I appreciated the 1st part more. Aptly complementing it.

It was beautifully written. Great job!

So sad, but so GOOD. ;o; I'm tearing up.

One of the best NejiTen fics I've ever read.

geezz! gai and ino! man...thats cruel o.o

but as i said before it was amazing and nothing was ooc which i love! i shed a tear which is rare. you are an amazing writer ]

I feel so sad and funny inside...It's a great story. I love the angstiness. Good job!

as usual your stories are always inspiring

It's so good! It's describes a war situation really well and I like how Tenten and Lee didn't let Neji go into battle alone.

Yet again another fantastic story. You have such a way with emotions.

God Lord... these stories are amazing... The way they are written, the plot, the setting. Everything. Amazing...

OMG. Notice the caps lock. I think you broke my heart again and again with this fic... and the end... wow, you made me cry! *sniffle* Great piece of work! Not surprised though.