love it! i can't wait to see what happens next!

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Good chapter mate! ;)

please update!

its a really really good story, but your grammar is a little off, and its not very descriptive, REALLY good story but its hard to concentrate on. Try describing stuff, and not everything has to be people talking, shove a bit of narative in there... good job, but yeahh...

very good! thanks for making another chapter.

Good job so far. Keep on going.