Excuse my ignorance, but what does "twenty paces by thirteen" mean? English is not my first language and I've not heard the phrase until now.

...This was so very, very awesome. Gabranth is wonderful.

Oh dear. It's been quite a while since I've been crying over FFXII-related things, but it's good, because it makes the feelings here so much stronger to me. And I must say, you have done a marvellous job bringing forth the feelings of care, happiness, sadness, everything. A beautiful work of fiction, and I have missed Gabranth and Larsa a lot, so perhaps this is what can inspire me to keep writing those two? I certainly hope so. Either way, your writing is wonderful, and the characterisation just as much so.

The sweetest of hells and the sweetest of tragedies! I could feel Gabranth's dedication to Larsa, the suffering, the emotion. Gorgeous! I loved it.

-DM