and here i thought that it would be confusing XD
am glade that i decied to read it!
it was so good ^-^

it was a little Angest, and i liked that luke dosent want Asch to disappear, it just our beloved typical luke ^.~

hope you write more Asch/luke stories :D
(in a freindship or family way ^^;)

:O

That was incredible. All the description, all the dialogue... everything. You did such a beautiful job, and I love it so much!

Oh my, my hands are shaking terribly. I have no words to describe this horrifyingly amazing fic. It's just...far to much for words to say...at least my words.

The emotion and description you put into this is simply...amazing. The melting snow...the anger...the withdrawn thoughts...the teamwork, but most of all, just their in-character emotions and personalities. It's stunning. You should recieve far more reviews for this. FAR more. This a masterpiece, so save it until you die of old age.

I dont think stories could be better than this, there is no possible way any part of this can't be taken to heart. It's like it pretty much stabs you. Which is a reward for writers right? The longing and confusion is amazing...my arms feel numb while I type this...ahaha...and I'm not sure that's a normal response.

My new goal is to make sure people see this story. I know my friends with love it. Keep writing! I look forward to whatever comes from your brilliant mind next!

Your fan, Inky

Love it =)
sorry donßt have much time

Wow, your style is very unique and amazing. What authors or books have you read to develop your particular style? I like your take on the ending, how it explains who the person was Luke and Asch merged into. I always thought Asch just merged into Luke, with Luke mostly in control.

Your story's very interesting. I like how Luke forgot Tear's name despite the clinging feeling that she means something very significant to him, it shows the feeling of being born a baby again, a clean slate (only Luke didn't come out as a baby). I also like Asch's role, he sort of sounds like Luke's conscience from the way you make him talk or in the way you describe him. I'm also interested in how you wrote this story. Your story format is very fresh and unique, I really enjoyed reading it.

All in all, great job! It gave me a clearer understanding of the ending, because I've always been very curious what would the two red-heads feel if they did merge...

Keep Writing!
Eucharion