Wow, this is just so beautiful. The details are vivid fine and delicate, creating a very nice spin to this story. I love how Luke was raised under this caring warmth, and is the reason he turns into be a naive adorable/bratty 'bocchama'

I really like how you conveyed the meaning in this story and how you should Luke's helpless ness with Guy's determination and inability to not get attached to Luke while keeping his bitter ness still there. It's a really poetic feeling piece and the whirl of emotions written in such a subtle and quiet way really does make it lovely. Plus I love how you included Suzanne here in the way that you did. She really loves Luke and it's nice to see her in fandom more like this.

Great work. =D

That was so beautiful I don't even know where to start.

You are an amazing writer, and you handled this so well. The stages of Luke learning and changing were all done so well that it's totally perfect. The beginning and end fit together so nicely, too. I really like that about it.

Guy's persistence was so in-character, and you really do a good job of showing how he grew attached to him over time; all that time spent trying to teach him to be Luke again.

I'm sorry I can't think of any more decent compliments, but this was wonderful and is hands-down one of my favorite TotA fanfics ever. Seriously. D:

That was gorgeous! I didn't want it to end! You made everything sound so real, like it was really happening here and now. I love all of Luke's habits, his little quirks, how you made him mature. It's so cute, and I love it!

Great concept; I enjoyed this story.

Aw...that was beautiful.

THat was so pretty.I liked teh way Luke learned slowly and the ending was very fairy tale-ish.

Fantastic fic, I have to say. I love reading up on how Guy helped raise Luke.

I always wondered why Van never told Guy that he kidnapped him... ah, well, that's for another fic.

Love your stories!

That was really beautiful, with a lot of tenderness and feeling. I really enjoyed this. Good job.

This is beautiful. I love it, especially Madame Fabre's interactions with Luke. This isn't the sweet arrival that a lot of authors give, but it's touching in its own way. I think that the trouble Luke has adjusting to the household makes the ending that much more special.
I love those last two paragraphs. It makes me want to play the game again.