D: the last line~

i like the snippets - the moments that out as everything spiraled downhill for zack. the worry about cloud, the fear and hiding and the haircut aowierjwoer *ded*

aw that was depressing D: but also very good! :D

This was amazing. The last line before Zack's last question was heartbreaking.

Poor Zack :( Poor Cloud:(
Love the story so far,
Please update soon :)

Depressing but fun.

Beautiful story! I just love this!

Aw, poor Zack and Cloud. This part of the game is always so sad, but your portrayal is truly raw and uncompromising. I think you missed a word here: 'Cloud falls out of tube', but that was the only error I saw.

D= I'm on the start of disc 3 in FFVII (and have been for an age because the bollocksing disc is scratched) and am still struggling with this sense of 'HOW DO PEOPLE MAKE FANFIC OUT OF THIS WHEN I CAN'T EVEN FOLLOW ANY BIT OF THE PLOT BESIDES 'WE HAVE TO SAVE THE WORLD'?'

But I got this fanfic ;_; and I loved it. Poor Zack...