urgh im trying so hard 2 hate this story but its just 2 good! well i personally like the sasuke gets a happy ending storys for the simplereason i think sakura deserves 2 be happy and if she doesnt have sasuke i dont think she will be happy. i like the whole sasuke gets his just deserts for his mistakes but man why!?!?!?!?! what about sakura and come on man he learned his leson let him live! ugh i love this fic i kant bring my self 2 hate it hurry and finish the eyes so i kan read it i dont wanna have 2 go all ninja on u when u dont update

i like this Story but the nding really was shocking, since it is a fan fic you can have chiyo therw and bring sasuke back and go on from there

Great story...I usually dont like stories with sad endings but i really enjoyed yours!Ill have to check out your other stories!! =]

The last few parts were very ironic... :) Loved it, anyway. XD

NO!
you're breaking my heart!
I so did not expect this. Cuz i loved the 1st ch and i seriously thought they had a happy ending coming thier way.
Dame you for making it so beautiful!
It was sad and sweet and felt really sincere.
so i guess, no i'm sure you deserve a great big 'ol basket of them virtual cookies everyone seems to be offering up.
It really was a beautiful piece even if it made me sad.
i'll probably add this to favs in a day or two after i'm done being mad at you^^

Nice title. And I really enjoyed this piece. I agree, I always knew Itachi was good but fics where he's evil are fun too! XD

great story!

I'm so into this. I too thought Itachi wasn't so evil but this is how i thought their battle would end, that Sasuke would kill Itachi and on the brink of death team 7 finds him. That didn't happen but I'm anxious to see how you'll play that storyline out. This was intense. I felt his regrets, his loneliness ( the way i think he really feels, considering the new movie and the latest manga chapter). The details were on point and really set the mood. This piece had atmosphere. can't wait for the next part. From sakura's pov? I hope you're like me: sweet with the romance and thinks sasuke deserves a really happy ending:)! Story Alert

So this is the infamous story you've been working on at your house when I come over. The one that you threw away 3 drafts... and the one I came up with. This is what you work on instead of The Eyes?

Well what I can say is that it is written out quite nicely. I did like the whole curse seal eating away at Sasuke. I think it worked out quite nicely. If you go by the storyboard you told me about the last time I was at your house, I think the next chapter will be great. This has potential, as do all of your fics. I hope you don't lie and actually do work on The Eyes this week, Ryken. We wouldn't want a liar on our hands.

Keep up the good work.

-Kirsizan

hey this is getting really god i jusy hope youm will continue to keep wrting his story