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Zuzanny
2009-03-31 . chapter 4
I am really enjoying this fic so far. I would like to know what happens next. ;)
kirallie
2009-02-11 . chapter 4
How sad!! More please?
Martiny the one and only still
2009-02-01 . chapter 4
Well, this will be interesting, no curfews, no worries, no money though...no parents, nothing except fighting the yeerks, they just have to know where 'they' are at all times so people don't see two of them at the same time. Update soon please.

-Martiny
Skyflight Erek's Loyalty
2009-01-21 . chapter 4
I liked this. It's a very interesting idea and I'm looking forward to seeng where you're going with this. A couple of things, though- Erek's name is spelled Erek, not Eric. And Chee is spelled Chee, not Chi. :D Sorry, I'm just really picky about that cause Erek's my fav character. Update soon please!
Catty Vancouver
2009-01-16 . chapter 4
I really like this. I haven't read an Animorphs story I liked this much in a really long time. I hope you continue it.
kqts
2009-01-16 . chapter 2
The story is really good so far, although you may want to correct the Yerk as it is spelt Yeerk.
Switchblade237
2008-10-15 . chapter 3
Ooh, that's a very interesting concept -- I always kinda wondered about the science behind morphing, especially back to an original form. Nice!
megumi
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
This is amazing. You got all their personalities so well, and that scenario would work so well with them. It's depressing is some ways, but it's that feeling of hopelessness that makes it a good read. Very entertaining!
Please update this!
critic
2008-10-01 . chapter 3
please keep writing, this is good stuff
Dreamer-MRAF
2008-10-01 . chapter 3
I loved the last line, and you've pinned down the characters' personalities well. The only mistake I caught was:

“Yeah,” asked Cassie, stifling a yourn, “like what?”

Yourn = Yawn.

-Dreamer
Elegos-Sirinial-Shamtul
2008-10-01 . chapter 3
Hey, um, you have some kind of Tech error with this chapter that says "Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4
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Elegos-Sirinial-Shamtul
2008-09-06 . chapter 2
Let me guess. Every time they morph, it resets their bodies back to how they were before morphing., including aging. Interesting. I wonder if I'm right.
animorph19
2008-09-05 . chapter 2
ok you got me. i'm hooked. now you have to write more soon :)
animorphlover 37
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
good start. sad start. the right start.
SouthrnBelle
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
Awesome...really like it :-)
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