Aw...everyone needs an umbrella! Unless, of course, you're like me and have had a lot of chocolate, and would rather spin around in circles until you nearly fall over in the mud.

Kagome's extremely persistent, but not obnoxiously so (usually). If she wasn't...he'd wind up soaked.

This is a very nice poem! The dialogue was a nice touch, and you had some good desciptions and emotions here. Good imagery, too! Keep up the nice work!

This was great! I loved it and it held so much emotion, yet nothing at the same time. There is really no word to express how much feeling this simple poem has. It was truly amazing. Keep up the great work!