Gah. 80% of the time, your stuff makes meh cry.But crying is good; it makes me feel happy that I'm crying 'cause of a fanfiction. That was a really good story, dude.
Well done. I was a little confused in places where the book was changing hands from one person to the next but it was still well written and I think you captured the character's personalities well, though I was puzzled by Zexion's sudden outburst of anger. Then again he probably was as well. Yup so here's to good stories and fun times! Cheers!
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