Chubee! Wow, long time no see. I had no idea that you wrote this at all. Gosh, I need to pay more attention to things.

Anyways, brillant, captivating fic! I've always thought that Sakura had this struggle throughout the series. Characterization is excellent, and you're really good at Sakura's POV. Everything that you write matches perfectly to the series. Well done!

FUDGE! Very awesome story you have. hmm I dont see the need for any criticism except longer...if you can. Please update

CONTINUE OR ELSE, I DON T KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!

this sounds really interesting!

Wow. Very dramatic. I was reading it a loud and I felt the emotion behind the words. Great start so far, keep it up!