Oh my gosh that was hillarious I love it Clopin is so funny I love him! Exellent work

omg i loved this story :D:D:D hahaha it made me laugh! way to go :D:D

Yeah. this is funny. I like Colpin

Where is Phoebus...?

Thats pretty hilarious.
Update soon, k?
I'll be watching.
In a noncreepy way.
:)

"Do-you-want-it-to-ha-sted ?!" Clopin saing in a loud voice."

Oh gawd, I think I just died laughing XD
wtf is a beta reader? XD

You have GOT to continue this!

First of all, the title made me giggle. But as far as I could tell, there was no refrence to Quasi at all in the story. Plus, I think it was OOC on Esmeralda's part to be nice to Frollo, even though he was her boss. Even though Djali's part in the story was cute (since I can totally see him slamming an oven door), most restaurants don't allow animals in restaurants unless they're service dogs. It also was too fast paced and you had not only many spelling errors, but a couple of grammar ones as well. However, I am willing to be your Beta if you'd like. Just PM me :)

Opal

I have to admit, I read this because your title made me laugh. xD You have some grammar mistakes and issues with coherency but other than that this is an amusing little fic.