 Reggie Tuesday 2009-11-03 . chapter 8It has been a long, long time since I've sat down with a story and read the whole thing through. And there is a definite chance I'll go back and read this again. I love this story to pieces. Thank you for writing it. *sits in loving adoration of story* |
 Ayame Shikazuge 2009-10-30 . chapter 8aw I wana know what will happen next!! |
 Koolneko22 2009-10-27 . chapter 8Nice ending.
I loved this.
Poor Sasuke-but he's better off than the manga version.
Though it would be great to see a sequel.
We don't know what happened to Itachi. And we can assume a lot of things about him and what happens with Sasuke etc, but if you feel up to it please write!
Keep up the good work with whatever you next project is. |
 Helike 2009-10-27 . chapter 8> I didn’t know what I would do when I met him. He would probably yell at me, kick me in the gut.
Not that you haven't deserved it, Sasuke, dear boy ^^;
> Just as I’d promised Itachi, I found Madara – and he told me the truth. Just as Itachi had promised me, I wasn’t ready for it.
It immediately made me think about PotC XD
> He had transferred his Mangekyou techniques into my eyes – and not a single word of warning.
LOL As if Itachi ever warned anyone about anything. Just saying.
> I said no. No, I didn’t want to join him. I wanted to be at peace.
Couldn't he be so wise in the manga? >.>;
It's hard to believe that it's over .__. |
 Dooki 2009-10-27 . chapter 8;_;
BUT I like.
I reread the first chapter and the last part of the last chapter and it really ... ;_;. Seriously, I love this. There are NOT enough introspective Sasuke Itachi fics.
HALSO...I like the bits of Naruto that you put in. I wish you would carry this on, but i know you wont.
oh oh, this is underhandycat0 btw. mysterious.
<3!! |
 Alcyone23 2009-10-27 . chapter 1FIRST ONE!
Why is the image of a high Sasuke so amusing? Seriously, I'm enjoying this state of being for him way too much. And paired with Itachi of all people... Poor Sasukito. *pokes him with a stick* |
 GinaWantsANewPenName 2009-10-27 . chapter 8I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this story. The dynamics between Itachi and Sasuke were so in character and true. It was just beautiful, the way you write this.
Are you going to have some sort of epilogue, maybe showing something about where Itachi is, and how Sasuke's conversation with Naruto goes? I'd love to know where they stand "currently" in your story-verse. |
 R.G. Waffles 2009-10-27 . chapter 8'Loha!
Oh. My. Gosh.
Can I tell you how beautiful that was? I don't think I can. I don't think there are any words to describe how unbelievably beautiful that was.
Very, very beautiful.
I really, REALLY want a word. A phrase. Anything to describe the feelings I felt when this ended. It was like floating somewhere on a cloud, looking down at a land of monotony. Like, enlightening, yet saddening. You know?
I love the way Itachi left this story - with a subtle bang. You did that amazing well.
But the best part - and I mean THE BEST was the end. The very end. No details, no unnecessary speech, just pure beauty and perfect diction. I loved it.
"Now we would talk."
I especially love how you took a bold leap and ended it right there without going on. It leaves such open possibilities.
I loved this. I mean, I REALLY loved this.
Thank you for this amazing story. Thank you VERY much.
Peace,
R.G. Waffles
PS - You're welcome. =) |
 Dooki 2009-10-25 . chapter 7;_-;
I have no words...I DID like seeing Sasuke truly himself around Itachi, instead of being kinda high, so it was hard to tell what was him, and what was just his lack of inhibitions making him act differently.
But but. My heart is broken. ;_: |
 SasukesRevenge7 2009-10-04 . chapter 7this better not be the last chapter D': i love this fanfiction. it is so well written, and such a beautiful [yet outstandingly confusing] plot line. i do hope you continue <3 |
 Helike 2009-10-02 . chapter 7> “What’s with the nail polish?”
Good question indeed ^^;
>“Ever heard the saying ‘Curiosity killed a cat’?”
LOL I suppose that even the words almost killed Deidara XD
> And an excellent magnet for trouble.
> Apparently Sasuke had no survival instinct whatsoever.
Too true >.>
> He had cut the tree down; yet here it was, standing as proud and tall before them as ever.
Evil tree XD
> “Oh, come on! Samurai of the Iron Country. The Golden Edition! The new play station release? Don’t tell me you’ve never–.”
You know... Sometimes I doubt that this guy is really Uchiha XD Playstation? o_O;
> “Don’t look at me like that,” Sasuke said without turning his head. “I already hate myself enough for sounding like Naruto.”
hahaha... Why isn't he like that in the manga? >.>;
> “I think I’ve come to learn something here. No matter how horrible a crime is, a criminal sometimes… deserves a second chance.”
Another example that he can think if he wants. Too bad that he forgot he can do that in the manga >.>
Nice one, but I sense tragedy coming closer ;__; |
 dark 2009-09-30 . chapter 7 that's the best chapter you wrote till now! KUDOS! the best read I had in a while and trust me I read a lot! and I love how you touched on the subject of itachi's choices only making things worse for sasuke. itachi meant well but he damaged sasuke more than anyone could ever do in the end. because itachi was sasuke's most precious person.
I'm glad someone sees that. most just bash sasuke even though the poor guy has went through things that could make the strongest people go mad and crazy. thanks alot for writing this! I love you! |
 Koolneko22 2009-09-26 . chapter 7Great chapter!!
Yay, Sasuke pretty much forgave Itachi!
But Itachi left?! Why? Did he think Sasuke would try to kill him the next day, and he decided that would hurt Sasuke woo much?
Out of the forest soon!
I wonder if Sasuke will run into Naruto before he finds Itachi again or something? I hope they don't stay seperated long. Sasuke needs to know the truth.
Though Itachi did leave the note...I wonder what it says?
I can't wait to read more!! I LOVE this story!!
Keep up the good work! |
 R.G. Waffles 2009-09-26 . chapter 7'Loha!
I was actually thinking about this story a few days ago. =)
Thank you for updating!
I really loved Kisame's pseudo pneumonia at the beginning of the chapter. Absolutely hilarious. And the making of the costumes is just downright awesome! Did you really have an explanation for the nail polish and the black, or were those conveniently-timed interruptions? |
 Koolneko22 2009-09-13 . chapter 6Great chapter! I love this!!
It's sad...
But I hope it can end happily...some what?
I love Sasuke 'crazy-ness'. I wonder if 'Naruto' is gone fof good, and he just has an inner voice now? But I can't judge that upon just this chapter...
I bet the first time Sasuke sees the real Naruto will be strange.
I can't wait to read more. |