|Reviews for My Only Light|
| Ilerya82 10/17/08 . chapter 1
I like that this is fragmented- that it doesn't really rhyme. The repetition of "still I had you" is very strong, very heartfelt. The feeling I get is that Rodney was absolutely tortured by Jennifer's death; it's palpable.
I think the ending, though not in the same rhythm could display the urgency he felt and that he was running out of time to fix what had gone wrong. I think the poem would have been stronger for the basic, technical point, but it is lovely none the less!
Keep at it!
| Whirlwind421 9/7/08 . chapter 1
| sparklyshimmer2010 9/5/08 . chapter 1
this was lovely.
| Chasing Liquor 9/5/08 . chapter 1
This is a sweet little piece.
"The kindest soul ever born to Earth,
you loved me more than I deserved.
In a world gone ever more mad,
you were all I needed, all I had."
Sums up Rodney right there.