Exactly how I imagined this!

I loved these. They weren't just the ordinary list type things a lot of people have; these had real substance. I enjoyed reading this so much. I can't say that I have a favorite: they were all incredible.

You did an excellent, excellent job with this. :D

Amazing story, loved all of the chapters. Please write about more people :)
I liked the first chapter the most but it is just because Peter is my favourite character. :)

This is an amazing story. It is so touching and sweet. Keep writing awesome stories!

Thank you. I ask you: How can I not like this?

I love Lucy's #10

Very impressive. Jill is next, right? Can't wait!

Oh, and I never got to thank you for reviewing Mirror of Erised. Thanks a bunchies! :D

Excellent chapter. Jill and Eustace really seem nice together. Please update soon.

I've always identified with Eustace. He begins as a fish out of water--a kid with no imagination in a magic world--and later after being "undragoned" he is an ordinary, everyday boy, with no crown in sight, true-hearted but not really a mighty warrior. So I'm always especially fond of stories that feature him. You've brought in some wonderful views of him, from the way he feels on his first meeting with Aslan to his reaction to Edmund's story about the Witch. Number Four, with his first view of Narnia ("ghastly, uncivilized creatures like that hateful mouse..."), is splendid. Really fine!

I'm really liking this story! My only suggestion is that you perhaps put the thoughts in chronological order... it might make your chapters flow better and help the reader figure out when some of the more ambiguous thoughts occurred.

Otherwise, I look forward to the next chapter!

-- Avia

Lovely! I thought it was very good. I personally think you did a better job with the Ten little facts about the Pevensies but this is still pretty good. I like the implied Eustace/Jill.

eusthance and jill belong together.

Ah! I never thought of Eustace and Jill together, but it seems perfect!

I love the little ten facts thing you have going, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I can't decide which one I like most...

Usually I'm against the Susan-Caspian paring, but you don't have that much of it in here...so...:)

Please write more!

Aw, such a cute chapie! Loved the insect part and ALL the Eustace/Jill fluff. I agree with you...they do belong together! Update soon, please?!