Oh my God...that was freaking awesome! Best piece of Twilight related poetry I've ever read! WHY ARE YOU SO UNDERAPPRECIATED DAMN IT? This stuff is...is...awesome for lack of a better word! Here's a cookie for you, since this story really deserves one.(gives you giant cookie of awesomeness) BYE! : )

I like it! I think that it would be better though If you connected a story to it...you know...how she gave it to Edward...his reaction...etc. But the poem is lovely...good job!

Really good. Very sweet.