Very nice! I just bought them movie and this story did wonders to get me into the Twilight mood. Of course, I'm hardly ever out of it. Amazing writing!

i love it

wow!!
i really like this pov, i liked breaking dawn, but i didn't like the fact, that belle never seemed to register the fact that she was pregnant... well we couldn´t read it...

I really like it.
Very good one-shot.
Now I'm going to read the next one.

enjoyed reading this. looking forward to the next ones.

I am reading this and really enjoying it. by the way there is a great book called faith preceedes the miracle you might enjoy it

Nice job. I liked your take on that bit of the chapter.

love the story!

Thank you so much for writing this.. WHy couldn't the book have gone this way? It makes perfect sense to me!

"Edward, I. . .I know this has been. . .difficult for you. I’m so sorry.” I'm glad Bella knows that she is hurting Edward.. maybe she knew it in the book too.. too hard to tell from Jacob's POV... I didn't like the way there was basically a wedge between them and Rosalie was pretty much making it bigger.. and hurry for changing the name Edward Jacob to Edward Anthony! hello... insensitive to Edward's feelings much? he can accept that Jacob is important to her, and appreciate what Jacob has done.. but to remind him everyday and have that name attached to his son? come on.. (I really did want the baby to be a son.. just not EJ... oh well..)

that was wonderful... if the book had gone that way.. I would have been SO MUCH happier... and THANK YOU for changing the names...Especially Edward Anthony... I can't imagine Edward hacing to live with Edward Jacob for the rest of his life...

Yeah, have to agree that your names are way better! Looking forward to reading the others...

keep it coming

That was really really beautiful writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

You know what would be totally awesome? If you did a companion piece in Edward's PoV. That would be SO cool!

This was great, keep up the great work!

~Ness

I like this chapter better than the on in BD. As of now that dont exist and yours does. you explained so much more...and had better name choices. Keep it up. See you on the boards

Marie
~twilightmoms