Sorry for being late : I was a little busy with my test and other fics such as Aramanth...

As usual, I like this. Good to see Yume (and the Beast Wars characters) again. And I think you choose the right bot to come with Dinobot and Yume, since that's logical... However, I would have suggested you bring in the present another Predacon too. Like Waspinator (lol^^)...

Only one criticism : shouldn't Yume be burned by Megatron's shoot instead of just getting hurt to the chest ? (by the way, Megatron really is a coward! Attack in this way is really dishonorable...). Guess the shoot wasn't at full power, just to threaten the Maximals...

Is she going to live through that?

W00T welcome back. Thanks for the update!!

Yay update! I've been looking forward to seeing an update for this story :D

It was really good. I'm glad they finally managed to find Megatron, hehe. Also YAY action and excitement!

I already know Yume will probably be fine, hehe. Although if I may make a request, I would like to maybe see a scene or something in the next chapter where they aren't sure if she'll be okay, and maybe Dinobot actually acts very concerned for once, hehe

It's up to you though, it's your story. Can't wait for more!

Good to see you back. ^^

NO! Don't end it there! Gyah!

I liked how you came up with this chapter despite having a major case of writers block.

Loved the cliffhanger, good luck on chapter 5 and on your other stories too.

Please update!!

well I'm likeing the way things are going so far, hmm I wonder what it would be like if Rattrap had came instead of cheetor. Oh well selavi, bur Cheetor is still one of my fav charaters so it's all good.

Hehe, this is funny! ^^ Wonder how it will turn out?

great chapter please update soon

Hehe, Megatron lost, that is funny, yees.

Another great chapter indeed. I can't wait for an update!

lol i feel bad for anyone that gets in Megs way
Men or in this case mechs do not like asking for directions, and when they have them and still get lost, holy **, you want to run away and hide

thanks for the update can't wait for the next one

I'm sure those girls will get back at Yume and Dinobot for calling them lesbians. Serves those blonde's right for picking on Yume all the time.

Good luck on chapter 4 and on your other stories too.

I liked this chapter a lot. I thought the part with the kids jumping all over Megatron was very funny. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^^