 Ogro 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Oh, wow! You write Avatar too! Unlike Star Wars, I feel safe in saying I know almost everything about Avatar xD
And even better, it focuses on two of my favorite characters without making it seem like an out-of-character romance (even though I am a big fan of the Zutara pairing).
They're both captured very well, perfectly in character, and their thoughts are backed up well by canon evidence. The points that they bring up are excellent ones, such as Katara realizing that Zuko needs to forgive himself in addition to her forgiving him. And best of all, she comforted him without mothering him, like she does to everyone else.
Zuko's conflicted feelings are written well without being overly angsty. Great job. Loved this oneshot =D |