I am impressed. I came across this fic last week, and every spare momemt at work have been reading it. Typically I don't read SW crossovers, however I was quite impressed on how you presented this fic. Now I need to go back and read your other works.

A very amasing story ^^ I loved it.

ROTFLMAO! I love your fanfic! All that build-up just for Old Moldy-shorts to get pasted by a Quad Laser cannon!! XD That is so fraking awesome!

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Thank you.

The author.

I must start out this review asking you to keep your mind open to what I am about to say. Your story to me was one of if not the most refreshing Luna love good centered fics I have ever read. As a devoted luna fan I have searched the internet far and wide to find fan fictions that are able to properly portray the amazingly unique luna. But I must say that I can no longer patronizing this work of fiction. Rape is not a plot device! I will repeat rape is not a plot device! I know by the time you reach this portion of my review you will already have multiple lines of excuses and righteous indignation at my accusation. But think about it, why did you make rape a part of this story. Was it for “conflict”? or maybe you used it for “character development”. at first I told myself that if luna was raped I would just stop reading and never think of this story again. But I feel compelled to reprimand you. This story this gross misuse of a deeply traumatic event a slap in the face to every person that has suffer through the trauma of rape. I began this story with a deep respect for you as an author, but I can no longer respect someone who uses the invasion of a helpless girls body to contribute to the climax of a story. It sickens and angers me that people like you with this deep insensitivity think its ok to use rape as a tool of creativity. People like you disgust me to sit in front of a computer screen and think you can write about this type of pain like its nothing! It infuriates me to my core. If you are offended then that is too bad I wish I could offend you more because this is not right. You can flame me or bad mouth me if you want but it won’t change the fact that you are in the wrong. I implore you to watch a documentary called the greatest silence rape in the Congo. If you have already seen it please watch it again, and reread your story. Now imagine telling one of those women featured in the documentary that you used the event that cause their pain to make your fan fiction more interesting. The use of rape as a plot device is the worst thing an author can do and I can not respect anyone that is insensitive to the point of cruelty.

great storry

Very nice. Quite a change from the regular HP fair.

a very interesting story but its was very hard to follow its was dry in most parts but creative none the less

A quite nicely written story. Thanks.

A wonderful story, I think it fits perfectly into both the SW universe and the HP canon, although rather better than some of the works in the SW universe. :-)

I particularly liked the changes that you made to the different characters as a result of Harry Potter not being alive. His absence changed things and in this story it did, very much.

I also liked the romance between Luna and Ben.
And thank you for not including too much detail of her kidnapping. I understand the necessity of the plot, but I'm glad I didn't get too many details.

Finally Voldemort meeting his end by space laser was an excellent idea.

I enjoyed the story very much, thank you for writing it.

This was really very wonderful to read. Though there are various typos thorugh the whole thing, some of which other reviewers caught. The most glaring of which is Little Hangleton.
Typos are really the most of your worries. I really enjoyed reading this and I lost sleep because of it. (compliment)
And wonton destruction is fantastic to read. I love big booms. *giggles* No boom today, boom TOMORROW. Always boom tomorrow.
*giggles again* Keep writing!

very good! keep the stories coming, thank you!

great story please update soon I would like to know what happens you are a great write please update soon

Nicely done. The biggest issue I see is how quickly Luna recovered at the end. While I don't remember exact details it would seem that her treatment was many times worse than say Neville's parents. Event with a nifty bond and such, it seems as if her speedy recovery was beyond remarkable.

Now I noticed in the notes at the end the idea of a sequel. Their country was wrecked, and the beliefs that brought the damage about are still there, along with the pain of all those who lost someone. There is a possible story to be written about how the world rebuilds, although this kind of thing might be better told by what are now a couple minor characters. Perhaps Daphne and her boyfriend's point of view would work well. Maybe Daphne, but not her boyfriend could learn the ways of the force. I can't see her family welcoming that, particularly since the force might be associated with those of impure ancestry due to Ben. Of course this is just an idea. There may be many better stories to write.,,

Outstanding!