Haha, wow, those guys must really be messed up if they honestly think they're drunk. XD Poor Reno.

Good going Tifa! *applauds* I like the fact that she convinced Reno to believe that he's drunk.

Lol! Those idiots didn't have a clue! Sneaky Tifa! Please update soon!~

lol this is so funny!

Lol, thanks for the story, funnily enough i'm drinking orange juice at this moment too...*looks at drink and sees if its possible to go high* I'm trying to so hard at envisioning Cloud drunk but its hard though i can so see the three soldiers in a bar joke. love it.

That is some mental play.. UPDATE!

hahaha. take that Reno. you didn't get drunk until you thought about it. and that was smart. and Yay! you updated so far so great!

Dude, that's flippin' amazing. I didn't know Tifa was that devious... or that people were so gullible o_O I mean, Cloud should have known about it, since he delivered the stuff, right? Damn... Ah yes, and that funny picture thing is almost done. I wanted more deliveries to put on there =D It's sort of a collage, I guess. Woohoo..

hahahahaha, i started cracking up in the partwhere its says,"Do you Reno?" Rufus raised an eyebrow at the red haired Turk.

"Of course not!" Reno defended, "I'm the perfect example of a good friend, Cloud's just emo!"
So far so good i still ove this story!

Lol, oh geez! Rufus trying to be best friends with cloud is great! I can totally imagine him dressed up in civillian clothes and going to Seventh Heaven and having Tseng or Reno hide and take pictures of the two like they were best friends or wouldn't it be funny if Rufus started crying to Tifa and she felt guilty and forced Cloud to play with Rufus?! Lol. Please have a sequel to this! It's too funny!

Oh my gosh! CLOUD! How could he not read the whole thing including the sender?? Someone should slap him XD! Great, another perfect chance at telling Tifa how he feels but its ruined. Poor Cloud, now I know he'll never get a chance at love with Tifa. I can imagine how Tifa feels though. Rufus had a good plan, I admit. I also laughed at the Turks dressing up as civilians while Rufus hangs aound them for publicity, lmao! Anyway, another awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! Love it! XD

dude, our story's are plain crazy, keep 'em comming



u cant see me, my time is now!

Poor Cloud...he just doesn't get a break, and his is being as dense as ever when it comes to Tifa...XD

I'd like to see another thing with Vincent... having Cloud deliver his armor polish and a 'special' present for Marlene... and have Reno somehow make that a mess...XD

Oh my. XD Cloud is such a goof ball. I can't believe he didn't notice that the letter was 'written from him'. Lol, Rufus isn't going to be happy when he finds out that the letter didn't make it too Tifa.

"I'm the perfect example of a good friend, Cloud's just emo!" lol brilliant move reno. Ahh poor Cloud, and what a shifty move Rufus...so crazy that it just might work. Keep updatin'.